Joshua Douglass-Molloy (genteijanken) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
[Twitter campaign application points and precautions]
-The prize winner will be individually informed through Twitter's direct message.
- The prize winner's announcement will be done concurrently within prize delivery.
- The prize winner's announcement is planned around end of October.
- This campaign might change or be canceled without notice.
- Campaign application will be accredited when tweet is done with hashtag during the campaign period.
- Applying to the campaign is accredited to agree to the application rules.

修正後
[Twitter campaign application points and precautions]
-The prize winner will be individually informed through Twitter's direct message.
- The prize winner's announcement will be done concurrently with prize delivery.
- The prize winner's announcement is planned for around the end of October.
- This campaign might change or be canceled without notice.
- Campaign application will be accredited when a tweet is made with the specified hashtag during the campaign period.
- Application to the campaign assumes agreement to the terms of application.

元の翻訳
Mr. XX

Good Day

I am terribly sorry to bother you on your busy schedule, however I would like to check if you had yet to receive the invoice that was sent previously?

I am troubled as it cannot be shipped from Florida to Japan.

Although it is a hassle, but please kindly help me out.

修正後
Mr. XX

Good Day

I am terribly sorry to bother you on your busy schedule, however I would like to check if you had yet to receive the invoice that was sent previously?

I am troubled as it cannot be shipped from Florida to Japan.

I know it is a hassle, but please kindly help me out.

元の翻訳
I checked the price of the product you sent me. I don't understand why it so reasonable is.
It's impossible to buy an official product with such price in Japan therefore we can't meet the selling price.
If you would like to send it back, please contact the customer support Amazon

修正後
I checked the price of the product you sent me. I don't understand why it is so cheap.
It's impossible to buy an official product with such a price in Japan therefore we can't meet the selling price.
If you would like to send it back, please contact Amazon customer support.