Kimberly Morrissy (frog_kun1) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I understand the situation about the invoice.
I can wait for the payment. Please don't worry.

The auction will end in about three more hours.
There are currently still no bids.
I plan to bid within the hour.

I will send you an email after the auction ends.
Please wait a little longer.

I hope you'll be able to get into that school!
I'm praying that you'll be able to go to your schooling and job better than in Japan.

You start dieting in spring?
Japanese people are the same. Everyone is lightly dressed, so they all seem to worry about it.
It's the same in every country, eh?

修正後
I understand the situation about the invoice.
I can wait for the payment. Please don't worry.

The auction will end in about three more hours.
At the moment, there are still no bids.
I plan to bid within the hour.

I will send you an email after the auction ends.
Please wait a little longer.

I hope you'll be able to get into that school!
I am sending you my prayers from Japan so that things will go well for you at school and at work.

You start dieting in spring?
Japanese people are the same. Everyone starts dressing lightly, so they all seem to worry about their body.
It's the same in every country, eh?

元の翻訳
Before the tour started, it took a whole thirty minutes for a polite lecture on how to handle the segway ensued, along with practice time. It was my first time riding a segway, and since I wasn't exactly the athletic type, I didn't have much confidence. But once I relaxed, I was able to start.

For lunch, I had some German dishes at a casual restaurant where you could see the Holocaust Memorial. It was cheap, but it was packed to the brim. The female guide was friendly the whole time and took a bunch of photos for me. We had a fun conversation with the other people who went along (a couple from London).

修正後
Before the tour started, we had a polite lecture on how to handle the segway ensued, along with practice time for around 30 minutes. It was my first time to ride a segway, and since I wasn't exactly the athletic type, I didn't have much confidence. But once I relaxed, I was able to start.

For lunch, I had some German dishes at a casual restaurant where you could see the Holocaust Memorial. It was cheap, but it was packed to the brim. The female guide was friendly the whole time and took a bunch of photos for me. We had a fun conversation with the other people who went along (a couple from London).