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Thank you for contacting us
The food is likely to be shipped from Japan the day after tomorrow.
Japan time is on 18th July, time there is on 17th July
It is likely to reach until 31st July, but there is a possibility that it is not arrive on 25th July. Is it bad if it arrive on 31st July.
If it is not okay we will give you 67USD refund.
Reply please.

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Thank you for contacting us.
The food [word confusion] is likely to be shipped from Japan the day after tomorrow.
It's July 18 in Japan time, time there is on 17th July
It will probably reach by July 31, but it may not arrive before July 25. Is it OK if it arrives on July 31?
If it is not acceptable, we will refund you $67.
Please reply.

元の翻訳
A fret is still more than 90%, you can play comfortably even at a lower string height.

The parts where a flaws in the vicinity of the jack of the body back appearance have been fixed, but overall it is still in a beautiful condition.

It has been displayed until 21st July since it has suspended by ebay, and it can no longer be re-displayed.
I think you'll be allowed to dealings directly since the products is still in stock at the moment

Regarding the products that got inquiries from a lot of people, we have decided a sales contract earlier.

Probably in the privacy of the relationship do not tell other until someone has bought the guitar.

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A fret is still more than 90%, you can play comfortably even at a lower string height.

The parts where a flaws in the vicinity of the jack of the body back appearance have been fixed, but overall it is still in a beautiful condition.

It [unclear antecedent] has been displayed until 21st July since it [wrong subject] has suspended by ebay, and it can no longer be re-displayed.
I think you'll be allowed to dealings directly since the products is still in stock at the moment

Regarding the products that got inquiries from a lot of people, we have decided a sales contract earlier.

Probably in the privacy of the relationship do not tell other until someone has bought the guitar.

元の翻訳
Okay. I want to cancel the outstanding item.
Can I pick up at the same amount if I want to order again?

Please send a settled item as soon as possible.

About the previous discount that we talk about
Houw much is the price of this item?

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Okay. I want to cancel the outstanding item.
Can I pick up at the same amount if I want to order again?

Please send a settled item as soon as possible.

About the previous discount that we talk about,
how much is the price of this item?

元の翻訳
2つの電源コ​​ネクタまたは2つの9V電池を必要とします。
さらに関数な記事を必要しませんn。

約14日間でNOCHによって再び使用可能。

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2つの電源コ​​ネクタまたは2つの9V電池を必要とします。
作動には他の物を必要としません。

約14日ほどでNOCHに再び入荷します。

元の翻訳
DNA分析を改善するためにBroad Institute とGoogleをチームアップします

Googleのゲノム解析、科学コミュニティストア、プロセス、ゲノムデータの大規模な帯状の管理を支援するGoogleのクラウドベースのプラットフォームは、マサチューセッツ州に拠点を置く生物医学とゲノム研究ハブのBroad Instituteと提携しています。

核心のパートナーシップはDNA分析の改善を中心し、もっと調整さして、個人のDNAメイクに基づいて、パーソナライズド·ヘルスケアを介して硬化疾患を支援します。治療は、特定のDNAプロファイルに影響を与えるために様々な方法を確立し、巨大なデータ量を必要とすることを達成し、これでクラウド·コンピューティングのパワーを必要とします。

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Google はDNA分析を改善するためにBroad Institute と協力する

Google Genomics は、科学コミュニティが大規模なゲノムデータを保存し、加工し、管理するのを支援するGoogleのクラウドベースのプラットフォームですが、マサチューセッツ州に拠点を置く生物医学とゲノム研究ハブのBroad Instituteと提携しています。

パートナーシップの核心はDNA分析の改善を中心とし、もっと調整されて、個人のDNA構成に基づいて、個人に合わせた健康管理を介して治療を支援します。治療は、様々な方法が特定のDNAプロファイルにどのように影響を与えるのかを確立ために巨大なデータ量を必要とし、これにはクラウド·コンピューティングのパワーを必要とします。↵

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

Could you connect your personal power cord?

I think it will work if you buy an electric converter in Japan.

By the way,is there any other things that you need?

As the start set, so it will work quickly, and if you want to buy you any nessesary part↵
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Please tell me.

Thank you for your attention.

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Thank you for your reply.

Could you include its personal power cord, too?

I think it will work if I buy an electric converter in Japan.

By the way, are there any other things that I need?

As a start set, I would like to use it quickly, and if I need to buy any other nessesary parts, I will, so please tell me.

Thank you for your attention.