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元の翻訳
Confirmation of Product Delivery

I recently purchased an item from Walmart. According to my order history, it was supposed to arrive on 6/24. However, I have not yet received a notification email from your company confirming the delivery. The order history on Walmart's website does not include a tracking number, but it does show a photo of the package upon delivery.It seems that the package may not have included a tracking number or my suite number on the label, which has happened before with Walmart shipments. I will send the relevant documents for this order via email.
Could you please confirm the whereabouts of my package?I look forward to your response.

修正後
Confirmation of Product Delivery

I recently purchased an item from Walmart. According to my order history, it was supposed to arrive on 6/24. However, I have not yet received a notification email from your company confirming the delivery. The order history on Walmart's website does not include a tracking number, but it does show a photo of the package upon delivery. It seems that the package may not have included a tracking number or my suite number on the label, which has happened before with Walmart shipments. I will send the relevant documents for this order via email.
Could you please confirm the whereabouts of my package? I look forward to your response.

元の翻訳
Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to Mr. XX as well, but he didn't have any music files. And he mentioned that he's not feeling well now. I pray for his health to improve.

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Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to 〇〇 as well, but they didn't have any music files. 〇〇 mentioned that they aren’t feeling well at the moment. I hope they get better soon.