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ly79503

This is how it looks when you cut them. (Everybody just dig into it without cutting...)

▼Egg Salad
"Egg Salad" is the most popular kind of sandwich in Japan, you will always find this kind of sandwiches at stores. Without a doubt, it's the best. But there are some unique ones, too.

▼Green tea milk & brown sugar syrup (?!!)
?? Sounds like there is a lot of ingredients in this. Let's clear our minds.
Green tea and ...

milk...

brown sugar syrup!

Brown sugar syrup??

It is what you stir brown sugar in water and heat it till thicken.

Brown sugar

is produced from sugarcane, commonly used in Okinawa and Kyushu area.

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ly79503

This is how it looks when you cut them. (Everybody just dig into it without cutting...)

▼Egg Salad
"Egg Salad" is the most popular kind of sandwich in Japan, you will always find this kind of sandwiches at stores. Without a doubt, it's the best. But there are some unique ones, too.

▼Green tea milk & brown sugar syrup Jello(?!!)
?? Sounds like there is a lot of ingredients in this. Let's clear our minds.
Green tea and ...

milk...

brown sugar syrup!

Brown sugar syrup??

It is what you stir brown sugar in water and heat it till thicken.

Brown sugar

is produced from sugarcane, commonly used in Okinawa and Kyushu area.

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ly77504

Definition of traditional Kyoto vegetables
1. Traditional vegetables which have been produced before the Meiji Restoration in1868 when the capital was located in Kyoto.
2. The vegetables are produced in not only Kyoto central city but also Kyoto prefecture.
3. It Includes Bamboo shoots.
4. It Excludes mushrooms, ferns (flowering royal fern, bracken, etc.)
5. It includes the vegetables which are grown only for the species preservation or the vegetables species which are not grown but it is preserved the species. And it includes the extinct vegetables.

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ly77504

Definition of traditional Kyoto vegetables
1. Traditional vegetables which have been produced before the Meiji Restoration in1868 when the capital was located in Kyoto.
2. The vegetables are produced in not only Kyoto central city but also the rest of Kyoto prefecture.
3. It Includes Bamboo shoots.
4. It Excludes mushrooms, ferns (flowering royal fern, bracken, etc.)
5. It includes the vegetables which are grown only for the species preservation or the vegetables species which are not grown but it is preserved the species. And it includes the extinct vegetables.

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French women usually do not use manicures. Instead, they scrupulously polish their nails to make them looks beautiful. This is the origin of the word, "French nail", a kind of nail art which looks natural.

Standard

Glitters on the border

A simple decoration

Inverse French nail
Inverse French nail leaves the base of the nail untouched, and add decorations to the rest part. This nail design stay beautiful if the nails grow slightly, so you can save money as you no longer have to visit a nail salon so often.

Inverse French with a simple decoration

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French women usually do not use nail polish. Instead, they scrupulously polish their nails to make them looks beautiful. This is the origin of the word, "French nail", a kind of nail art which looks natural.

Standard

Glitters on the border

A simple decoration

Inverse French nail
Inverse French nail leaves the base of the nail untouched, and add decorations to the rest part. This nail design stay beautiful if the nails grow slightly, so you can save money as you no longer have to visit a nail salon so often.

Inverse French with a simple decoration

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It’s OK for the workplace! French Nail.

In the Japanese offices, we cannot be clad as casual as Western nations. (In the tacit rule) Also, it is important to be neat. So be sure not to be overly decorous. It is the office manner to enjoy fashions “unintentionally”.

What is French Nail?
Though French Nail is directly interpreted as “The French style Nail”, in fact French Nail was born in the United States.

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It’s OK for the workplace! French Nail.

In the Japanese offices, we cannot be clad as casual as Western nations. (In the tacit rule) Also, it is important to be neat. So be sure not to be overly decorous. It is the office manner to enjoy fashions “unintentionally”.

What is French Nail?
Though French Nail is directly interpreted as “The French-style Nail”, in fact French Nail was born in the United States.

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ly63201

-What is Disposable Pocket Warmer?

To explain simply,　it is a portableand flat-pouched body warmer developed by using a chemical reaction of iron.

-What is inside?
Iron powders, activated coals, water, salts and vermiculite are in it.
Inside of a disposable pocket warmer, there are iron powders, water which accelerates iron powders to get rusted, salts, vermiculite as water retention agent and activated coals which acquires oxygen in the air.

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ly63201

-What is Disposable Pocket Warmer?

To explain it in simple terms,it is a portable and flat-pouched body warmer developed through using a chemical reaction of iron.

-What is inside?
Iron powders, activated coals, water, salt and vermiculite are in it.
Inside of a disposable pocket warmer, there are iron powders, water which accelerates iron powders to get rusted, salts, vermiculite as water retention agent and activated coals which acquires oxygen in the air.

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ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
A HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

A new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer has been announced. Considering how regular Heattechs are constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get a hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

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ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
A HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

There was an announcement on all new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer than the previous version. Considering how regular Heattechs are constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

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ly62706

Camellia oil has been used habitually by Japanese women as natural skin-care oil and other beauty products.

Camellia oil is commonly used for hair care products as well as cosmetics.

What is camellia?
Camellia is evergreen tree native to Japan. It produces red and white flowers from winter to spring, though it varies in different varieties.

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ly62706

Camellia oil has been used habitually by Japanese women as natural skin-care oil and other beauty products.

Camellia oil is commonly used as （ヘアケア商品としても、とあるので）hair care products as well as cosmetics.

What is camellia?
Camellia is evergreen tree native to Japan. It produces red and white flowers from winter to spring, though it varies in different varieties.

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It's everybody's must-have item for the wintertime in Japan. [Uniqlo's Heattech]

Let us introduce you to the must-have winter item known to almost all Japanese, starting with the warm innerwear worn by most Japanese.

Uniqlo's heattech became the Japanese winter standard since 2003.

Today Japan's Uniqlo has made its name internationally. Uniqlo's heattech line of products, first intriduced in 2003, has become a standard for surviving the winter in Japan.

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It's everybody's must-have item for the wintertime in Japan. [Uniqlo's Heattech]

Let us introduce you to the must-have winter item known to almost all Japanese, starting with the warm innerwear worn by most Japanese.

Uniqlo's heattech became the Japanese winter standard since 2003.

Today Japan's Uniqlo has made its name internationally. Uniqlo's heattech line of products, first introduced in 2003, has become a standard for surviving the winter in Japan.

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1. Tokyo by the day
Close up of Tokyo Tower (day time)

2. Tokyo by the night
Close-up of Tokyo Tower (night time)

You could see two completely different sides of Tokyo!

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1. Tokyo by the day
[Close up of Tokyo Tower (day time)]

2. Tokyo by the night
[Close-up of Tokyo Tower (night time)]

You could see two completely different sides of Tokyo!

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Entrance

There are several entrances.
You can find it easily by the sign of “MORI TOWER” on the doors.

Business hours
Weekdays/Holidays：10:00~23:00 (Final entry: 22:30)
Fridays/Saturdays/Days before a holiday: 10:00-25:00((Final entry: 24:00)

Fees
Adults：1500yen/ Students(High school and University): 1000yen/ Kids(4years old-Junior high)：500yen

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Entrance

There are several entrances.
You can find them (entrancesというように、複数の出入り口について記載されているため）easily by the “MORI TOWER” signs on those doors.

Business hours(特定の店舗や企業の営業時間ではなく、ビルの営業時間なので、Opening hoursのほうが適切かと思われます。）
Weekdays/Holidays：10:00~23:00 (Final entry: 22:30)
Fridays/Saturdays/Days before a holiday: 10:00-25:00 (Final entry: 24:00)

Fees
Adults： 1500yen / Students (High school and University): 1000 yen / Kids (4years old - Junior high)： 500 yen

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Illuminated Tokyo tower at night is very romantic setting. You cannot miss it. Then Mori tower building at Roppongi Hills is the best place to go.

It is 238 meters in height above the ground and has 54 floors. Though it is smaller than Tokyo tower which is 333 meters in high, there us nothing to worry about.
Mori tower building is at Roppongi Hills.

Introduction to Roppongi Hills

Cinema
The cinema has the latest audio system. They offer all-night screening till 5am every weekend.

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Illuminated Tokyo tower at night is very romantic setting. You cannot miss it. Then Mori tower building at Roppongi Hills is the best place to go.

It is 238 meters in height above the ground and has 54 floors. Though it stands lower than Tokyo tower which is 333 meters in height, there is nothing to worry about.
Mori tower building is one of the buildings in Roppongi Hills complex.

Introduction of Roppongi Hills

Cinema
The cinema has the state-of-the-art audio system. They offer all-night screening till 5 am every weekend.

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The Starbuck's sakura macaroon is made in the motif of this sakura rice cake. This is a traditional Japanese sweet.
What covers the rice cake made from pink-colored mochi rice (sticky kind of rice), is a pickled leaf of cherry blossoms.

To faithfully reproduce the taste of sakura rice cake, pickled leaves of cherry blossom is actually kneaded into the macaroons. Therefore, they are slightly salty.
The store is sakura everywhere!

Inside the store, it is fully in sakura mode, by the pink color of the "SAKURA" series and the in-store decoration (vary between store locations).

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The Starbuck's sakura macaroon is made with the motif of this sakura rice cake. This is a traditional Japanese sweet.
What covers the rice cake made from pink-colored mochi rice (sticky rice), is a pickled leaf of cherry blossoms.

To faithfully reproduce the taste of sakura rice cake, pickled leaves of cherry blossom is actually kneaded into the macaroons. Therefore, they are slightly salty.
The store is sakura everywhere!

Inside the store, it is fully in sakura mode, by the pink color of the "SAKURA" series and the in-store decoration (vary between store locations).

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What are salted cherry blossoms?

Salted cherry blossoms are cherry blossoms mixed with salt and vinegar (or lemon) and using stones as pickle press, marinated for 2-3 days and dried.
Although they taste salty, the scent of cherry blossoms are deepened.

Salted cherry blossoms are often used in Japanese pastries,

but Japanese pastry shops also use them to convey Japanese flavor in Western pastries they make.

And... there is indeed such a product!
▼Cherry blossom macaron
The macaron in "SAKURA" series, that is. (even the packing design is really lovely, feeling just like spring ^^)

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What are salted cherry blossoms?

Salted cherry blossoms are cherry blossoms mixed with salt and vinegar (or lemon juice) and using stones as pickle press, marinated for 2-3 days and dried.
Although they taste salty, the scent of cherry blossoms are condensed.

Salted cherry blossoms are often used in Japanese pastries,

but Japanese pastry chefs also use them to convey Japanese flavor in Western pastries they make.

And... there is indeed such a product!
▼Cherry blossom macaron
The macaron in "SAKURA" series, that is. (even the package design is really lovely, feeling just like spring ^^)

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*Be sure to wash the rice many times in order to make them glutinous, if you use foreign rice; no matter which rice you use.

It is very simple to make.

1. All combine
Pour raw egg and soy sauce into the rice…

2. Stir with chopsticks!
In fact, foreigners try rice poured raw eggs more than Japanese. You can make it that simply.
That’s it.
Now you can eat. Let's have the dish while it is hot.

That’s amazingly delicious… isn’t it?
The eggs obtained in Japan are fresh so that you can eat them raw.

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*Be sure to wash the rice many times in order to make them glutinous, if you use foreign rice（外国米は一般的にLong grain riceではないかと思います。Foreign riceと言ってしまうと、ちょっと不自然かもしれません）; no matter which type of rice you use.

It is very simple to make.

1. Combine them all
Pour raw egg and soy sauce into the rice…

2. Stir with chopsticks!
In fact, foreigners try rice poured raw eggs more than Japanese. You can make it that simply.
That’s it.
Now you can eat. Let's have the dish while it is hot.

That’s amazingly delicious… isn’t it?
You can enjoy them raw, as normally eggs on the market are fresh in Japan.

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When visiting Japan, the most recommendable place to check! Special localized Hello Kitty! ～Osaka ver～

Now that Hello Kitty has gained world-wide big fame. In Japan there are localized Hello Kitties in many areas. Many Japanese people buy and collect the special localized Kitty in their destination. When you collect such Kitties, you will learn the local culture and special products, as well as you will get a special memory.
The first is Osaka version!

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When visiting Japan, the most recommendable place to check! Special localized Hello Kitty! ～Osaka ver.～

Now that Hello Kitty has gained world-wide big fame. In Japan there are localized Hello Kitties in many areas. Many Japanese people buy and collect the special localized Kitty in their destination. When you collect such Kitties, you will learn the local culture and special products, as well as you will get a special memory.
The first is Osaka version!

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I have not received the item as of January 21. Checking the USPS tracking number you sent to me shows that it has been held at Bell Gardens, CA, since January 12.

I want the item. Could you do something about this for me?

By the way, you said that you could not send my item to the address I had gave you. I am looking for another address in the U.S., so please allow me a while.

If I fail to find an address to receive the item, I may cancel the order.

Regards,

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I have not received the item as of January 21. Checking the USPS tracking number you sent to me shows that it has been held at Bell Gardens, CA, since January 12.

I want the item. Could you do something about this for me?

By the way, you said that you could not send my item to the address I had given you. I am looking for another address in the U.S., so please allow me a while.

If I fail to find an address to receive the item, I may cancel the order.

Regards,

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Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau and Okinawa Prefecture will host the "Okinawa Tourism & MICE Content Fair - All Okinawa Great Exhibition -" on January 28 in Osaka, and January 29th in Tokyo.

Okinawa tourism industry is developed into a field to represent the province and the number of tourist achieved record high in 2013. Along with the enhancement of tourism resources such as the National Park designation of the Kerama Islands, it's expected the further development of tourism · MIC by improving access to port terminal of Naha Port and international terminal of Naha Airport this year.

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Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau and Okinawa Prefecture will host the "Okinawa Tourism & MICE Content Fair - All Okinawa Great Exhibition -" on January 28 in Osaka, and January 29th in Tokyo.

Okinawa tourism industry is developed into a field to represent the province and the number of tourist achieved record high in 2013. Along with the enhancement of tourism resources such as the National Park designation of the Kerama Islands, the further development of tourism and MICE are expected through improved access to port terminal of Naha Port and international terminal of Naha Airport this year.

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I have included the files of all the merchandise bills.
In case you find something wrong with the bills, please tell me which article it is. I am rushing the shipping of the articles.
Could you reply early by today, whether there is no problem with the shipping IDs or not?

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I am sending you a file that contains invoice for all of the merchandise.
Should you find a merchandise whose invoice is missing, please tell me which article it is. I am rushing the shipping of the articles.
Could you reply early by today, whether there is no problem with the shipping IDs or not?