翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/01/21 22:13:17

日本語

ly61202

夜のライトアップされた東京タワーはとてもロマンチック。これを見逃す訳にはいきません。
そこでオススメなのが、
六本木ヒルズ森タワー!!!

地上高は238mの54階建て。東京タワーの333mと比べると低めですが、心配ありません。
森タワーは、六本木ヒルズの中にあるタワーです。

六本木ヒルズの紹介

映画館
最新の音響システムが使われた映画館。週末には朝5時までオールナイト上映が行われています

英語

Illuminated Tokyo tower at night is very romantic setting. You cannot miss it. Then Mori tower building at Roppongi Hills is the best place to go.

It is 238 meters in height above the ground and has 54 floors. Though it is smaller than Tokyo tower which is 333 meters in high, there us nothing to worry about.
Mori tower building is at Roppongi Hills.

Introduction to Roppongi Hills

Cinema
The cinema has the latest audio system. They offer all-night screening till 5am every weekend.

レビュー ( 1 )

chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/31 19:34:11

元の翻訳
Illuminated Tokyo tower at night is very romantic setting. You cannot miss it. Then Mori tower building at Roppongi Hills is the best place to go.

It is 238 meters in height above the ground and has 54 floors. Though it is smaller than Tokyo tower which is 333 meters in high, there us nothing to worry about.
Mori tower building is at Roppongi Hills.

Introduction to Roppongi Hills

Cinema
The cinema has the latest audio system. They offer all-night screening till 5am every weekend.

修正後
Illuminated Tokyo tower at night is very romantic setting. You cannot miss it. Then Mori tower building at Roppongi Hills is the best place to go.

It is 238 meters in height above the ground and has 54 floors. Though it stands lower than Tokyo tower which is 333 meters in height, there is nothing to worry about.
Mori tower building is one of the buildings in Roppongi Hills complex.

Introduction of Roppongi Hills

Cinema
The cinema has the state-of-the-art audio system. They offer all-night screening till 5 am every weekend.

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