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日本語

ly62707

２０１３年新商品『ヒートテックエクストラウォーム』
１.５倍暖かいヒートテック

更に１.５倍暖かい新しいヒートテックが発表されました。通常のヒートテックでも、冬本番になってしまうと売り切れ続出のため、入手はなかなか困難になりそうです。もしも店頭で見つけたら、是非確保を。型はまだ２種類と少ないですが、どちらも１，５００円です。

英語

ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
A HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

A new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer has been announced. Considering how regular Heattechs are constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get a hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

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chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/04 22:38:10

元の翻訳
ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
A HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

A new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer has been announced. Considering how regular Heattechs are constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get a hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

修正後
ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
A HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

There was an announcement on all new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer than the previous version. Considering how regular Heattechs are constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/05 11:04:46

元の翻訳
ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
A HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

A new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer has been announced. Considering how regular Heattechs are constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get a hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

修正後
ly 62707

The new product of 2013, "HeatTech Extra Warm"
HeatTech that's 1.5 times warmer

This new Heattech that's 1.5 times warmer has been announced. Considering how regular Heattech is constantly sold out during the middle of winter, it will probably be very hard to get a hold of the new version. Be sure to buy some if you find them in a store. There are only two designs for now, but they both only cost 1,500 yen.

Nice work, somehow HeatTech isn't quite its own noun yet so I wouldn't use 'a' with it