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評価: 60 / 1 Review / 2014/01/22 02:31:19

日本語

ly77504

京野菜の定義
1. 京都に都が置かれていた明治維新以前からの生産されていた歴史を有する野菜の品目。 2. 京都市域のみならず、京都府内全域で生産されている野菜の品目。 3. 筍を含む。 4. キノコ類、シダ類(ぜんまい、わらび等)を除く。 5. 種の保存の為にのみ栽培されている野菜の品目。又は、栽培されていないものの種が保存されてい る野菜の品目。及び絶滅した野菜の品目を含む。

英語

ly77504

Definition of traditional Kyoto vegetables
1. Traditional vegetables which have been produced before the Meiji Restoration in1868 when the capital was located in Kyoto.
2. The vegetables are produced in not only Kyoto central city but also Kyoto prefecture.
3. It Includes Bamboo shoots.
4. It Excludes mushrooms, ferns (flowering royal fern, bracken, etc.)
5. It includes the vegetables which are grown only for the species preservation or the vegetables species which are not grown but it is preserved the species. And it includes the extinct vegetables.

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/22 13:05:16

元の翻訳
ly77504

Definition of traditional Kyoto vegetables
1. Traditional vegetables which have been produced before the Meiji Restoration in1868 when the capital was located in Kyoto.
2. The vegetables are produced in not only Kyoto central city but also Kyoto prefecture.
3. It Includes Bamboo shoots.
4. It Excludes mushrooms, ferns (flowering royal fern, bracken, etc.)
5. It includes the vegetables which are grown only for the species preservation or the vegetables species which are not grown but it is preserved the species. And it includes the extinct vegetables.

修正後
ly77504

Definition of traditional Kyoto vegetables
1. Traditional vegetables which have been produced before the Meiji Restoration in1868 when the capital was located in Kyoto.
2. The vegetables are produced in not only Kyoto central city but also the rest of Kyoto prefecture.
3. It Includes Bamboo shoots.
4. It Excludes mushrooms, ferns (flowering royal fern, bracken, etc.)
5. It includes the vegetables which are grown only for the species preservation or the vegetables species which are not grown but it is preserved the species. And it includes the extinct vegetables.

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rasinblancs rasinblancs 2014/01/22 13:18:44

添削どうもありがとうございます。

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