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元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
Right now, it seems that I have been charged twice for the same item.
Please refund the overpayment for the item.
Also, I had on more issue. Why has "My Order History" been deleted?

Below I've included the Paypal transaction ID. Please confirm.

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Thank you for your response.
Right now, it seems that I have been double charged twice for the same item.
Please give me a refund for the amount that I have overpaid for the item.
In addition, I would like to know the reason for "My Order History" been deleted?

Below I've included the PayPal transaction ID, so please confirm.

元の翻訳
I am so sorry.
The track number I told you was wrong.
The correct number is ××.

As you can see in the attached picture, it says the product will arrive in CA on × ×th it has been taking longer than expected even though. It might be stuck at customs or it has been lost somewhere.

In that case, since you have joined the insurance, you will not pay any extra costs and we will refund all the money to you.

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I am sincerely sorry.
The tracking number （Track number というと、音楽メディアなどのトラックナンバーです。）I told you was wrong.
The correct number is ××.

As you can see in the attached picture, it appears that the product has been arrived in CA on × ×th, and it has been taking longer than usual for delivery. It might be stuck at customs or it has been lost somewhere.

In that case, since your shipment is covered by insurance that you will not charged for any extra charges and we will refund all the money to you.

元の翻訳
I have requested the forwarding company to receive the item.
Since the item was shipped due to the inconsistencies caused at your end, please cancel the order # Y113709294 upon receipt of the returned item at your end.

Considering the return shipment fee from Japan as well as the tariff for receiving an alternate item are too costly.

Although the wrong item was sent to me, I will just keep it.
Hencce therefore, I will decline receiving Order # Y113709294, so please cancel it accordingly.

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I have requested the forwarding company to receive （Rejectではないですか？）the item.
Since the item was shipped due to the mistake caused at your end, please cancel the order # Y113709294 upon receipt of the returned item at your end.

Considering the return shipment fee from Japan as well as the tariff for receiving an alternate item are too costly.

Although the wrong item was sent to me, I will just keep it.
Hence therefore, I will decline receiving Order # Y113709294, so please cancel it accordingly.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the purchase.
The one bis has been missing at the base of the handle during the inspection of the product before shipping.
Yet, the leather for the base of the handle is sewed onto the main part, this will not be issue for the use. (Please check the picture.)
*Inside of the bag is peeling and sticky, therefore it can't be used. It requires the repair.
This is completely my mistake.
If you are willing to purchase it as is, I like to return part of $100 and ship it immediately.
If you like to cancel the order, I will fully refund you immediately.
Please let me know your decision.
I'm very sorry for the inconvenience this has caused.

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Thank you for the purchase.
Our inspection prior to shipping revealed that one of the screws has been missing at the base of the handle.
Yet, the leather for the base of the handle is sewn onto the main part, this will not be an issue for the use. (Please check the picture.)
*Inside of the bag is peeling and sticky, therefore it can't be used. It requires the repair.
This is completely my mistake. →This is a complete mistake on my part
If you are willing to purchase it as is, I would like to give you a partial refund of $100 and ship it immediately.
If you would like to cancel the order, I will give you a full refund immediately.
Please let me know your decision.
I'm very sorry for the inconvenience this may have caused you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the purchase.
We checked before the shipment and found a screw feel off from the handle.
However, this part is sewed to the handle, so it will not be a problem. (check the picture)
*The inside part of the bag is torn off, so it must be fixed. This is totally my mistake.
If you will purchase this item at its current condition, so I will send it right now with $100 refund.
If you cancel it, I will refund all the money right now.
Please tell me which works better for you.
I'm sorry for my mistake.

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Thank you for the purchase.
We checked before the shipment and found that one of the screws fell off from the handle.
However, this part is sewn on the handle, so it will not be a problem. (Please check the picture)
*The bag cannot be used as the interior of the bag is detached, and sticky. So it must be fixed. This is totally my mistake.
If you will purchase this item with its current condition, I will ship it to you right now with a $100 refund.
If you cancel it, I will immediately give you a full refund.
Please tell me which works better for you.
I'm sorry for my mistake.

元の翻訳
リクエストを早速拝見いたしました。ご不都合をお掛けしてしまい、大変申し訳ございません。

弊社のパフォーマンス・チームと協議の結果、もう一度ご購入手続きをしていただく次第となりました。お客様の方で商品を既定の適正価格より安値で販売してしまったため、アクションプランが制限されているのがその理由でございます。

そのため、手続きをもう一度お試しになっていただけますでしょうか。下記のリンクより、どのようにアクションプランが行われるかについて、より詳しくご覧いただけます。

アクションプランが完了した後、パフォーマンス課の者に、下記のメールアドレス宛てに直接送信して頂きますよう、よろしくお願い致します。

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リクエストを早速拝見いたしました。ご不都合をお掛けしてしまい、大変申し訳ございません。

弊社のパフォーマンス・チームと協議の結果、再度行動計画をご用意していただく次第となりました。貴店が商品を既定の適正価格より安値で販売してしまったため、販売が制限されているのがその理由でございます。

再度、嘆願手続きを行っていただけますでしょうか。下記のリンクより、行動計画の作成方法を含めた詳細についてご覧いただけます。: (***URL***)

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行動計画が完了した後、パフォーマンス部門の者に、下記のメールアドレス宛てに直接送信して頂きますよう、よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
喜んであなたのリクエストを確認しました。ご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ありませんでした。

我が社のパファーマンスチームに連絡して、次のような結論となりました。貴店には行動計画をもう一度行っていただく必要があります。なぜなら、チェック機関によって定められた公式価格よりも低価格で商品を販売していたために、販売停止になっていたからです。

従って、嘆願書どおりに再度実行していただけますか？詳しい情報や行動計画の作成手順を次のリンクで確認してください。(***URL***)

行動計画ができ上がったら、パーフォーマンス部門のスタッフに直接送ってください。emailのあて先は次のとおりです。 (***e-mail***)

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喜んであなたのリクエストを確認しました。ご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ありませんでした。

我が社（「弊社」のほうがいいかとおもいます）のパフォーマンスチームに連絡したところ、次のような結論となりました。貴店には行動計画をもう一度行っていただく必要があります。なぜなら、チェック機関によって定められた公式価格よりも低価格で商品を販売していたために、販売停止になっていたからです。

従って、嘆願書どおりに再度実行していただけますか？詳しい情報や行動計画の作成手順を次のリンクで確認してください。(***URL***)

行動計画ができ上がったら、パーフォーマンス部門のスタッフに直接送ってください。emailのあて先は次のとおりです。 (***e-mail***)

元の翻訳
Avoiding sun, heat and humidity, keep the item in a place under 28 degree Celsius.

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Avoiding sun, heat and humidity, keep the item in a place under 28 degree Celsius (where possible).

元の翻訳
Xiaomi：次期発売タブレット Mi Pad、16セントでベータ版販売へ

今月上旬、中国で人気の携帯電話メーカーXiaomiが、近々販売が予定されているMi Padを7.9インチスクリーン、保存容量16GBで1499中国元（およそ$240）で売り出すと発表した。この発表は驚くような物ではないが、１点謎が残った。創始者のLei Jun氏は販売がいつになるのかは明らかにしなかった。

一般の中国人消費者がXiaomiのウェブサイトにログインしてMi Padを手に入れられるかはまだ分からないが、最後まで反対するようなファンはすぐに1人民元（およそ$0.16）というような衝撃を受けるだろう。

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Xiaomi：次期発売タブレット Mi Pad、16セントでベータ版販売へ

今月上旬、中国で人気の携帯電話メーカーXiaomiが、近々販売が予定されているMi Padを7.9インチスクリーン、保存容量16GBで1499元（←人民元ならばともかく、中国元とは言わないと思います。）（およそ$240）で売り出すと発表した。この発表は驚くような物ではないが、１点謎が残されている。創始者のLei Jun氏は販売がいつになるのかは明らかにしていないのだ。

いつ、一般の中国人消費者がXiaomiのウェブサイトにログインしてMi Padを手に入れられるかはまだ分からないが、筋金入りのファンはもうすぐ1人民元（およそ$0.16）という価格で入手できるチャンスがある。

元の翻訳
Luggage has arrived at the nearest post office.
If you contact the post office, it is possible to confirm the delivery date and time.
And I listed the web address of the post office and the tracking number below.

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The package has arrived at your nearest post office.
You can contact the post office to confirm the delivery date and time.
Please find the website address of the post office and the tracking number below.

元の翻訳
Hello, Jack
I know you don't have it in your stock now, so don't worry about it.
When you obtain item, please send me an invoice. I will make payment when I receive the invoice.
Will you obtain the item on next Tuesday? Or, do you expect it today or next week?
Please let me know your expected date.

In addition, I have been emailing to you by using the machine translation tool or the web translation service.
Therefore, the sentences may be always different and there may be sentences you cannot understand. If you encounter such situation, please let me know. I will put my efforts to make it understand easily.

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Hello, Jack
I know you don't have it in your stock now, so don't worry about it.
When you obtain the item, please send me an invoice. I will make payment when I receive the invoice.
Will you obtain the item on next Tuesday? Or, do you expect it today or next week?
Please let me know of the date you expect to receive it. (Please let me know when you are expecting it to be delivered to you)

In addition, I have been emailing to you by using the machine translation tool or the web-based translation service.
Therefore, the sentences may be always different and there may be sentences you cannot understand. If you encounter such situation, please let me know. I will put my efforts to make it easier for you to understand.

元の翻訳
弊社は米国企業で、御社の製品に大変興味を持っております。御社との末永いお付き合いをさせて頂けたらと存じます。弊社はあわせて購買とサプライチェーン企業でもあり、多くのチェーン店や小売アウトレットなどにも取引がございます。品質は弊社にとって大変重要な要素であることは言うまでもありません。下記は御社専用に作成させて頂いた共有ファイルへのリンクで、必要な数量とサンプル写真などを含めた弊社の注文内容の詳細が入っております。

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弊社は米国企業で、御社の製品に大変興味を持っております。御社との末永いお付き合いをさせて頂けたらと存じます。弊社はあわせて購買とサプライチェーン企業でもあり、多くのチェーン店や小売店などとも取引がございます。品質は弊社にとって大変重要な要素であることは言うまでもありません。下記は御社専用に作成させて頂いた共有ファイルへのリンクで、必要な数量とサンプル写真などを含めた弊社の注文内容の詳細が入っております。

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
Firstly, I am very much relieved to hear that the items is delivered to you.
Well, it seems that you would like to replace the item because the temperature is not displayed in Fahrenheit, but I don't have any clock which can display temperature in Fahrenheit, so I would like to issue a refund instead of the replacement.
For processing the refund, the bid winner is responsible for the return shipping charge (by EMS).
If you could accept about the responsibility of return shipping charge and let me know, I will proceed to process the refund.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Firstly, I am very much relieved to hear that the item is delivered to you.
Well, it seems that you would like to exchange the item because the temperature is not displayed in Fahrenheit, but I don't have any clock which can display temperature in Fahrenheit, so I would like to issue a refund instead of the exchange.
For processing the refund, the bid winner is responsible for the return shipping charge (by EMS).
If you could accept the responsibility of return shipping charge and let me know, I will proceed to process the refund.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I cannot directly ship the rug I recently purchased, so I got a transfer agent.
When it got to Japan, I found out that the color was different from what I ordered.
The address in Florida is the address of the transfer agent.

Even if I return the item from Japan to Florida, the shipping cost will be so much.
I want to get a full refund by returning it, but it will be expensive to do so, so this time I keep this item.

I see order Y113709294. Does that mean I will get charged again?
If it has been ordered, I want to cancel it.

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I cannot directly ship the rug I recently purchased, so I am using a service from a forwarder.
When it got to Japan, I found out that the color was different from what I ordered.
The address in Florida is the address of the forwarder.

Even if I return the item from Japan to Florida, the shipping cost will be so much.
I want to get a full refund by returning it, but it will be expensive to do so, so this time I keep this item.

Am I going to be billed for order Y113709294 again?
If it has been ordered, I want to cancel it.

元の翻訳
I haven't heard from you recently so I assume you are busy

Please let me make sure one thing about our business.
We've looking forward to your reply.

Do you depend on us with the right of sub agency temporary that we suggested before?
We will be able to wait relieved if you could provide us your answer.

Thank you for your attention im your busy time.

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I haven't heard from you recently, so I assume you are busy

Please let me make sure one thing about our business.
We're looking forward to your reply.

Per our previous suggestion, would you be interested in appointing us as your sole agency for Japan, even for a limited period?↵

We will be able to wait for your response free from anxiety, if you could provide us your answer.

Thank you for your attention in your busy time.

元の翻訳
It says, the account registration was completed on June 7th from Japan... but I receive no approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

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My name is ..., I have registered for my account from Japan on June 7th, but I still have not received approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

元の翻訳
Can I temporally cancel all the three items you have bided? I do not know how to cancel only two of them. I will calculate the shipping cost of item A and B to Paris and send you an invoice via PayPal. Please let me know your living address in Paris and phone number.

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Can I temporarily cancel all the three items you have bidded? I do not know how to cancel only two of them. I will calculate the shipping cost of item A and B to Paris and send you an invoice via PayPal. Please let me know your shipping address in Paris and phone number.

元の翻訳
Yes sir, I absolutely would like to adjust our schedule to yours to discuss about possibilities in our future. Can I directly contact to Mr. xxx regarding adjustment of schedule?
To Mr. xxx > I will give you a contact later. I appreciate you in advance.

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Yes sir, I absolutely would like to adjust our schedule to yours to discuss about possibilities in our future. Can I directly contact Mr. xxx regarding adjustment of schedule?
To Mr. xxx > I will give you a contact later. I appreciate your cooperation in advance.

元の翻訳
■Hello, 〇〇 is available.
Do you still need it?

The price is 〇〇$.

■Hello, I'm sorry for not contacting you earlier.
Please let me explain. I have contacted several shops, but I couldn't find it, so I have now inquired with the manufacturer directly.
I haven't received a reply yet, so I would ask you to wait just a little longer.

Thank you for your patience.

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■Hello, 〇〇 is available.
Do you still need it?

The price is 〇〇$.

■Hello, I'm sorry for not contacting you sooner.
Please let me explain. I have contacted several shops, but I couldn't find it, so I have now inquired with the manufacturer directly.
I haven't received a reply yet, so I would ask you to wait just a little longer.

Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
Giftpassの共同創設者ヴィンセント・マー- カナダ民族中国人だ - 彼は友人の赤ちゃんの誕生のお祝いに贈り物を購入したい思った時にアイデアが生まれたと言います。中国ではオンラインクーポンやギフトのオプションはほとんどなく、それを見つけても電子メールが中心であった。しかし彼は彼女のメールアドレスを知りませんでした。誰が実際に電子メールを通じて良い友人と話すのか？他のギフトオプションはさらに面倒であり、贈り物のためにサインを要求する。多くのギフトがクレームなしで届けられる発想はなかった。

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Giftpassの共同創設者ヴィンセント・マー氏- 中国系カナダ人だ - 彼は友人の赤ちゃんの誕生のお祝いに贈り物を購入したい思った時にアイデアが生まれたと言っている。中国ではオンラインクーポンやギフトのオプションはほとんどなく、また、見つかったとしても電子メールが必要であった。しかし彼は彼女のメールアドレスを知らなかった。誰が実際に電子メールを通じて良い友人と話すのか？他のギフトオプションはさらに面倒であり、贈り物のためにサインを要求する。多くのギフトがクレームなしで届けられる発想はなかった。

元の翻訳
We have received the unreasonable demands that would fraud by return request and a charge back from the buyer.

I sold the PlayStation network card, and I was requested to tell the code from any buyer, so I taught the code as required.

Please check the history contents of e-mail.

By teaching this code, the buyer will be able to play the game within the content of PlayStation.

Therefore I can't send the card itself, but buyers have received consideration of money paid to us.

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We have been receiving the unreasonable demands that could be considered as fraud by return request and a charge back from the buyer.

I sold the PlayStation network card, and I have provided the code to the buyers as they were requested by each one of them.

Please check the e-mail records for the details.

By providing these codes, the buyers will be able to play the game within the content of PlayStation.

Therefore I have not sent the cards themselves, but buyers have received consideration of money paid to us.

元の翻訳
販売者になぜ注文を返金したのか説明するためにメッセージを送ることができます。↵
は↵
販売者メッセージでなぜ注文が返金されたのを買手に説明するために連絡することができます。

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注文の返金時のバイヤー宛通信機能で、バイヤーに注文を返金した理由を説明するメッセージを送信することができます。また、(この機能の)代わりに、バイヤー・セラー間メッセージでも、注文が返金された理由をバイヤーに説明するために連絡することができます。

元の翻訳
We announce about the extension of best before date. We talked about it with the maker and they told us that if they let them be drier than before, it is possible to set the best before date as one year. But it might become close to cookies. It makes them to make a sample again, but do you still want the sample?

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We announce about the extension of best before date for "Kiako energy bars". We talked about it with the manufacturer, and they told us that if they let their moisture level lower, it is possible for us to set the best before date as one year. But they might become something close to cookies. It will require them some time for them to make the samples again, but do you still want the sample?