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日本語

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英語

I haven't heard from you recently so I assume you are busy

Please let me make sure one thing about our business.
We've looking forward to your reply.

Do you depend on us with the right of sub agency temporary that we suggested before?
We will be able to wait relieved if you could provide us your answer.

Thank you for your attention im your busy time.

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chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/17 07:48:04

元の翻訳
I haven't heard from you recently so I assume you are busy

Please let me make sure one thing about our business.
We've looking forward to your reply.

Do you depend on us with the right of sub agency temporary that we suggested before?
We will be able to wait relieved if you could provide us your answer.

Thank you for your attention im your busy time.

修正後
I haven't heard from you recently, so I assume you are busy

Please let me make sure one thing about our business.
We're looking forward to your reply.

Per our previous suggestion, would you be interested in appointing us as your sole agency for Japan, even for a limited period?↵

We will be able to wait for your response free from anxiety, if you could provide us your answer.

Thank you for your attention in your busy time.