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This other day, I bought ●●
The product has arrived and I confirmed it but there's some round decorative parts that are missing.
It is possible to return the product?
If it's possible, I would like you to tell me where I should return it.
Also I suppose that I have to support the postage charge right?
Thank you

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The other day I bought ●●
The product has arrived and I confirmed it but some round decorative parts are missing.
It is possible to return the product?
If it's possible, I would like you to tell me where I should return it.
Also I suppose that I have to bear the shipping charge, right?
Thank you.

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I'm using ebates add-on on Google Chrome.
On the top screen of the products on ebay, there are products that are displayed with "Activate Cash Back"
Should it means that you can get a cash back from those ?

Also, from ebates site, if I make a research on ebay, when i display the "Search results", "Showing 1 of 1 Stores" and "B" appears but in the case I want to get a cash back, which "shop now" should I click on ?

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I'm using the ebates add-on with Google Chrome.
At the top of the eBay products screen, there are products that are displayed with "Activate Cash Back"
does this means that you can get a cash back from those ?

Also, from ebates site, if I do a search of 'ebay', when it displays the "Search results", it shows "Showing 1 of 1 Stores" and "B" appears but in the case I want to get a cash back, which "shop now" should I click on ?

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Without going through Ebay, we would like to buy directly from you,
We are very pleased to hear that you can directly replenish your stock from the manufacturer.

Could you sell us this product at a retail price ?

We are also interested in your others products.
We would like to sell those others products at a wholesale price.

For example, could you purchase xx and xx from the manufacturer ?
Is it possible to purchase the following products ?

We would like to keep our business for long-term by dealing with your products.
Do you possess an online shop ?
Please tell us if you have one

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Without going through Ebay, we would like to buy directly from you,
We are very pleased to hear that you can directly replenish your stock from the manufacturer.

Could you sell us this product at a retail price ?

We are also interested in your others products.
We would like to sell [mistranslation] those other products at a wholesale price.

For example, could you purchase xx and xx from the manufacturer?
Is it possible to purchase the following products?

We would like to keep our business for long-term by dealing with your products [mistranslation].
Do you have an online shop?
Please tell us if you have one.

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以下のアイテム

MOQ: 20個から100個
価格: 　各30ドル×20　600ドル＋35ドル (DHL またはTNT Express)＋　20ドル ( 手数料 ) = 655ドル
準備ができて、在庫を持っています。決済が確認出来次第、次の営業日に出荷させていただきます。
パイパルにてお支払いいただきます。パイパルのメールを教えて頂いたら、請求書を送ることができます

何かわからないことがありましたら、遠慮なく連絡してください
お返事を待ちしております

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以下のアイテム

MOQ: 20個から100個
価格: 　各30USドル×20　600USドル＋35USドル (DHL またはTNT Express)＋　20USドル ( 手数料 ) = 655USドル
準備ができて、在庫を持っています。決済が確認出来次第、次の営業日に出荷させていただきます。
パイパルにてお支払いいただきます。パイパルのメールを教えて頂いたら、請求書を送ることができます

何かわからないことがありましたら、遠慮なく連絡してください
お返事を待ちしております

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
What is the scheduled date for the two goods to arrive at my place ?

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Thank you for contacting me.
When would be the approximate delivery date for the two goods to my address?

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In the event of a tie, every player will earn points.
ie: The number of dice of each color in each area are as follows.
Area 1：red ３、blue ３、yellow ４
　Area 2：red ２、blue ３、yellow ３
　Area 3：red １、blue ３、yellow ０
In each area, the color of dice with the highest number will have the sum of the dice added as points.
If many players have the same number on the dice , the player with the lower sum will have point added.
As a result, the relative score is the result of the above diagram.

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In the event of a tie, every player will earn points.
ie: The number of dice of each color in each area are as follows.
Area 1：red 3, blue 3, yellow 4
　Area 2：red 2, blue 3, yellow 4
　Area 3：red 1, blue 3, yellow 0
In each area, the color of dice with the highest number will have the sum of the dice added as points.
If many players have the same number on the dice , the player with the lower sum will have point added.
As a result, the relative scores are shown in above diagram.

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Hello
Thank you for you enquiry.
The period of validity of this product is roughly 3 years.
I will send the gift as your request delivery method.
Currently the product is very popular in Japan so there may be some delay in the shipping. I am really sorry.
I will send the product when preparation are complete.
I am sorry but until shipping I will have to make you wait.
Thank you for using our shop.

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Hello
Thank you for you inquiry.
The period of validity of this product is roughly 3 years.
Regarding the method of delivery, I will ship this as a gift as your requested.
Currently the product is very popular in Japan, so there may be some delay in the shipping. I am really sorry.
I will send the product when preparation are complete.
I am sorry but until shipping I will have to make you wait.
Thank you for using our shop.

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9/30(tue) Nico Nico Live diffusion special sales site opening has been decided ！

■Nico Nico Live diffusion special sales site opening has been decided！※9/30(tue)4pm Start

（PC）http://shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397
（MB）http://m-shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397

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9/30(Tue) Nico Nico Live diffusion special sales site opening has been decided!

■Nico Nico Live diffusion special sales site opening has been decided！※9/30 (Tue) 4pm Start

（PC）http://shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397
（MB）http://m-shop-stage.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?jsiteid=MDNI&categ_id=8002397

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1st October LIVE DVD&Blu-ray Release. For the people buying「DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 - THE ENTERTAINER」↵
「a signed poster by DAICHI MIURA」 will be given as a present !

Sale time：From September 30th 4:00 pm until 5th October 11:59 am

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1st October LIVE DVD&Blu-ray Release. For the people buying "DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 - THE ENTERTAINER" "a signed poster by DAICHI MIURA" will be given as a present !

Sale time: From September 30th 4:00 p.m. until 5th October 11:59 a.m.

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「HELLO WORLD」Live performance！

【Airtime】10pm - 12pm

http://www.j-wave.co.jp/original/helloworld/

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"HELLO WORLD" Live performance!

Airtime: 10 p.m. - 12p.m.

http://www.j-wave.co.jp/original/helloworld/

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「HELLO WORLD」Live performance！

【Airtime】10pm - 12pm

http://www.j-wave.co.jp/original/helloworld/

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”HELLO WORLD" Live performance!

[Airtime]10pm - 12pm

http://www.j-wave.co.jp/original/helloworld/

元の翻訳
郵送物が最適な状態で到着しなかったことを聞いて申し訳ありません。
早く解決する方法を決定するために時間をかかて、以下の質問を答えください

1.ボックスが改ざんされた証拠があるのですか？?
2. 赤と白の停止テープは箱に切断されましたか？?
3. 何らかの理由で出荷の通関に遅れがありましたか？
4. ローカルキャリアオフィスにこれを報告しましたか？
5. 郵送物に保険を購入しましたか？

問題をどのように進めるかを確認するまで、箱を保持してください.　お返事を待ちしております.

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郵送物が最適な状態で到着しなかったと聞いて残念です。
早く解決する方法を決定するためにお時間を割いて、以下の質問を答えください

1.ボックスが改ざんされた証拠がありますか？?
2. 箱の赤と白の停止テープは切断されていましたか？?
3. 何らかの理由で出荷関の出荷に遅れがありましたか？
4. 地元運送会社にこの件を報告しましたか？
5. 郵送物に保険をかけましたか？

問題をどのように進めるかを確認するまで、箱を保持してください.　お返事を待ちしております。

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①I have listened to this song too but it may has been the classic version so it sounded different. I haven't listened to the full version but i wonder if it's still available on YouTube?
②I haven't watched it until the end yet.
③She won't show any sign of fatigue in front of the children. She's always trying to make us feel comfortable while smiling herself.
④I m looking at pictures in which my children are smiling when I m tired or depressed. strangely it makes my tiredness dissappear and
⑤I have never seen it.
⑥I still working

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①I have listened to this song, too, but it may have been the classic versión, so it sounded different. I haven't listened to the full versión, but I wonder if it's already available on YouTube?
②I haven't yet watched it until the end.
③She won't show any sign of fatigue in front of the children. She's always trying to make us feel comfortable with a smile.
④I look at pictures of children smiling when I'm tired or depressed. Strangely it makes my tiredness dissappear and [incomplete]
⑤I have never seen it.
⑥I'm still working.

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①I have listened to this song too but it may has been the classic version so it sounded different. I haven't listened to the full version but i wonder if it's still available on YouTube?
②I haven't watched it until the end yet.
③She won't show any sign of fatigue in front of the children. She's always trying to make us feel comfortable while smiling herself.
④I m looking at pictures in which my children are smiling when I m tired or depressed. strangely it makes my tiredness dissappear and
⑤I have never seen it.
⑥I still working

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①I have listened to this song too but it may has been the classic version so it sounded different. I haven't listened to the full version but i wonder if it's still available on YouTube?
②I haven't watched it until the end yet.
③She won't show any sign of fatigue in front of the children. She's always trying to make us feel comfortable while smiling herself.
④I’m looking at pictures in which my children are smiling when I’m tired or depressed. strangely it makes my tiredness dissappear and
⑤I have never seen it.
⑥I am still working

元の翻訳
stretcheese / Tosa kyoudai / party Uchiyama / Machiura Pink / Matsubara Tanishi/ Lolita zoku .
[MC]
Oiwa Larry Masashi / Shibata Hidetsugu ( Untouchables )

【9/14(Sun)】
＜LIVE AREA・RAIJIN STAGE＞
[ARTIST]
NMB48／FTISLAND／Every Little Thing／Shiristu Ebisu Middle School／T.M.Revolution／DENPA GUMI.inc／SHUN(OPENING ACT)／Matsuzaki Shigeru(GUEST)／Half time Old (Inazuma gate 2013 first prize winner)

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Stretcheese / Tosa kyoudai / Party Uchiyama / Machiura Pink / Matsubara Tanishi/ Lolita zoku
[MC]
Oiwa Larry Masashi / Shibata Hidetsugu ( Untouchables )

【9/14(Sun)】
＜LIVE AREA・RAIJIN STAGE＞
[ARTIST]
NMB48／FTISLAND／Every Little Thing／Shiristu Ebisu Middle School／T.M.Revolution／DENPA GUMI.inc／SHUN(OPENING ACT)／Matsuzaki Shigeru(GUEST)／Half time Old (Inazuma gate 2013 first prize winner)

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The ordered merchandise is not arriving.
I would like a refund now

Even though the scheduled delivery date has expired, the merchandise is not coming.

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The ordered merchandise has not arrived yet.
Please issue a refund immediately.

Although the expected delivery date has expired, the merchandise has not arrived yet.

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I have yet to receive the invoice for the order 0923
may I ask you to send it for today ?

I have receive the confirmation that the order no 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
but it seems that the order 1195 from september 9th isn't shipped yet
why is that ?
if the stock of merchandise that i did order is not sufficient, could you please at least send me what you still have in stock first.

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I have yet to receive the invoice for the Order0923.
May I ask you to send it by the end of today ?

I have confirmed that the Order No. 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
But it seems that the Order No. 1195 ordered on September 19th has not been shipped yet.
Why is that ?
If it is on hold because of a part of the inventory is out of stock, then could you go ahead and ship the available ones first?↵

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I have got a mail from amazon and it seems that your marchandise was sent.
Please contact Amazon customer service below if you need any detail about the time and date of arrival of your marchandise or don't understand something.
Until you leave for Asia, i hope sincerely that the marchandise will arrive safely.
Thank you very much for purchasing this time and i am looking forward to do some business again

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I received a mail from Amazon and it seems that your merchandise was sent.
Please contact Amazon Customer Service below if you need any detail about the delivery time of your merchandise or don't understand something.
I sincerely hope that the merchandise will arrive safely before you leave for Asia.
Thank you very much for purchasing this time and I am looking forward to doing business again.

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i am really sorry for the lateness of the sending
it took time to do the packaging
i will send the product today by EMS and notify you the tracking number so you can trace it.

i have sent the product today
i am really sorry that it took so much time

i am really sorry but the product that you successfully bid have been damaged.
i will refund you. i will make a transaction cancelllation on EBAY so please accept it
i am deeply sorry for the trouble. if there is another product that you are interested in, please let me know
i will grant you a 10% discount

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i am really sorry for the delayed shipping.
it is taking time to do the packaging.
i will send the product today by EMS and notify you the tracking number so you can trace it.

i have sent the product today.
i am really sorry that it took so much time.

i am really sorry but the product that you successfully bid has been damaged.
i will refund you. i will make a transaction cancellation on EBAY so please accept it.
i am deeply sorry for the trouble. if there is another product that you are interested in, please let me know.
i will grant you a 10% discount.

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獲得するのがなかなか難しいので弱20ドルはちょっと無理です。米国では39ドルごとにいっぱい売っています。
もし欲しかったら、29ドルそれぞれとクロームのものについて22ドルを売ることができます。

私も22ドルで獲得しています

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獲得するのがなかなか難しいので20ドル弱ではちょっと無理です。米国では1個39ドルでいっぱい売っています。
ご希望でしたら、各29ドルとクロームのものについて22ドルで売ることができます。

私も22ドルで獲得しています

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Thank you for your inquiry
the data that you bought can be re-download up to 100 time from your personal purchase history.
it is as well possible to download the data that you bought with your smartphone or a computer terminal from your office to your personal computer at home.

we really grateful for the interest that you have for our product.
I contacted the manufacturer , but that it seems that there is no oversea dispatch of the corresponding product
Sorry that I couldn't be of any help to you

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The data that you purchased can be re-download up to 100 times from your personal purchase history.
It is also possible to download the data that you purchased with your smartphone or computer terminal from your office to your personal computer at home.

We are really grateful for the interest that you have in our product.
I contacted the manufacturer , but it seems that there is no overseas dispatch for appropriate/corresponding product.
Sorry that I couldn't be of any more help to you.

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どうですか？全部時間に間に合って翻訳できると思いますか？

二つの追加の注意事項
英語のテキストが明日の終わりまでできていなかったら10月6日の元の発表日に戻って行かなければなりません。
週末の仕事のため50ユーロのボーナスを提供することができます。

時間に間に合えるかどうか教えてください

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どうですか？全部時間内に翻訳できると思いますか？

追加の注意事項2点
・英語のテキストが明日中までにできていなければ、当初の発表日である10月6日のに戻さなければなりません。
・週末業務のため特別手当50ユーロを提供します。

時間内に対応可能かどうか教えてください。

元の翻訳
March 2011, 9th original album 「Dejavu」release. Earn the 1th place on the weekly Oricon ranking. April of the same year, after approximately 4 years, 「Koda Kumi Live Tour 2011 ～Dejavu～」 a nationwide hall tour was holded. At various place the ticket were completely sold out.
May of the same year, for her 10th year anniversary, 「KODA KUMI 10th Anniversary ～FANTASIA～」live concert at tokyo dome was released

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March 2011, 9th original album 「Dejavu」release. Earn the 1th place on the weekly Oricon ranking. April of the same year, after approximately 4 years, 「Koda Kumi Live Tour 2011 ～Dejavu～」 a nationwide hall tour was held. At various places the tickets were completely sold out.
May of the same year, for her 10th year anniversary, 「KODA KUMI 10th Anniversary ～FANTASIA～」live concert at Tokyo Dome was released