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Chakrit W (chakrit_w) — 付けたレビュー

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約12年前
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chakrit_w この翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました タイ語 → 英語
2014/06/27 21:43:48
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Good work.
chakrit_w この翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました タイ語 → 英語
2014/06/27 21:41:09

元の翻訳
Article 2 : According to article 1, the council have powers and duties from the following.
1. Present policy management plans and measures to maintain the mission of the National Council for Peace and Order.
2. Nationalise and monitor the performance of enterprises. In order to the management of the enterprise is to be effective and cause the topmost effectiveness.
3. Integrated operation of enterprises to unity.
4. Propose guidelines to fix various issues of enterprises consist of management, operations and finance to the National Council for Peace and Order.
5. Promote and encourage private sector to invest in the public enterprises.
6. Appointed a subcommittee and working group to support operations as required.

修正後
Article 2 : According to article 1, the council have powers and duties from the following.
1. Present policy management plans and measures to maintain the mission of the National Council for Peace and Order.
2. Nationalise and monitor the performance of enterprises. In order to the management of the enterprise is to be effective and cause the topmost effectiveness.
3. Integrated operation of enterprises to unity.
4. Propose guidelines to fix various issues of enterprises consist of management, operations and finance to the National Council for Peace and Order.
5. Promote and encourage private sector to invest in the public enterprises.
6. Appoint a subcommittee and working group to support operations as required.

chakrit_w この翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 英語 → タイ語
2013/03/06 14:35:49
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Nice translation, still using a bit too official language though IMHO ;-)