Ayako Tanishiki (ayakot) — 付けたレビュー

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Now, let's take a look at how the low yen rate leverages the Japanese stock price. Here is an example.

According to the Wall Street Journal in January 2014, an article talks about Honda as follows.

Besides Honda, many Japanese export companies have improved their business results by increasing their profit.

修正後
Well, why do Japanese stock price rise when the lower yen occurs . I also examined it. Here is an example.

According to the Wall Street Journal in January 2014, an article talks about Honda as follows.

Besides Honda, many Japanese export companies have improved their business results and increased their profit.

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*Please note that it is not allowed to save spots with your luggages nor sitting on.
Guests will be required to follow our staff's directions.
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*Please note that any photographs, recording or video-taping are strictly prohibited during the event.