Nick Roma (animemog) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
All right! The Red Socks are amazing.
It's great they were able to pull it off on their home grounds.
I'm sure the people of Boston are feeling great joy.
Also, it looks like Uehara is having fun to me.
His emotional strength is uncanny!

I was told that his mother was hospitalized from pneumonia and was on the verge of death. However, the doctor said she is recovering and next week she will attempt to consume food by mouth. Because she is 102 years old, everyone, the doctor and family included, are astonished at the longevity and strength she possesses.
I'll mail you again later.

修正後
Alright! The Red Socks are amazing.
It's great they were able to pull it off on their home ground.
I'm sure the people of Boston are feeling great joy.
I also really enjoyed being able to watch Uehara play.
His emotional strength is uncanny!

I was told that his mother was hospitalized from pneumonia and was on the verge of death. However, the doctor said she is recovering and next week she will attempt to consume food by mouth. Because she is 102 years old, everyone, the doctor and family included, are astonished at the longevity and strength she possesses.
I'll email you again later.

元の翻訳
All right! The Red Socks are amazing.
It's great they were able to pull it off on their home grounds.
I'm sure the people of Boston are feeling great joy.
Also, it looks like Uehara is having fun to me.
His emotional strength is uncanny!

I was told that his mother was hospitalized from pneumonia and was on the verge of death. However, the doctor said she is recovering and next week she will attempt to consume food by mouth. Because she is 102 years old, everyone, the doctor and family included, are astonished at the longevity and strength she possesses.
I'll mail you again later.

修正後
All right! The Red Socks are amazing.
It's great they were able to pull it off on their home grounds.
I'm sure the people of Boston are feeling great joy.
Also, it looks like Uehara is having fun to me.
His emotional strength is amazing!

I was told that his mother was hospitalized from pneumonia and was on the verge of death. However, the doctor said she is recovering and next week she will attempt to consume food by mouth. Because she is 102 years old, everyone, the doctor and family included, are astonished at the longevity and strength she possesses.
I'll mail you again later.

元の翻訳
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Your special days with a special camera will leave behind a beautiful gallery.

修正後
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let's save the different special days taken with a special camera in a beautiful gallery.