Magdalena (akithegeek1) — 付けたレビュー

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I have confirmed that I could play the video of Vevo in my website, the script for it was old version though.
I wonder if it would not "an error has occurred" according to countries ? If you can play Vevo video , I imagine it would be better.

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I have confirmed that I could play the Vevo videos on my website, even though I used the old version of the script.
I wonder if there are some countries in which the error doesn't occur? It'd be better if you could play Vevo videos , wouldn't it?

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I checked. I was able to play Vevo’s video on my site (Even though I use the old version script).
Maybe an error doesn’t occur depending on your country? It would be better to be able to play Vevo’s video, right?

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I checked it. I was able to play Vevo’s videos on my site (Even though I use the old version of the script).
Maybe there are some countries in which the error doesn't occur? It would be better if you were able to play Vevo’s videos, right?

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I checked and found that it was able to play the Vevo video in my own website. (Even though I was using old version script.)↵
Will error occur causing by country? It will be better if the videos of Vevo can be played successfully.

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I checked it ony my side and found that I didn't have any problems with playing Vevo videos on my own website. (Even though I was using an old version of the script.) It's possible the error doesn't happen in some countries. It will be better if it was possible to play the Vevo videos.

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Thank you for your reply.Can you accept a discount above 5%?If the discount depends on the amount of purchasing,could you tell me the correspondence relationship?
For example
5:5%
10:8%
20:10%
etc
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And how many should I buy in one time?Please tell me the number of lots.

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Thank you for your reply. Could you give me a discount of more than 5%? If your discounts depend on the amount of purchased items, could you tell me how many items would I need to buy and how big the corresponding discount would be?
For example
5:5%
10:8%
20:10%
etc
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How many items do I need to buy per transaction? Please tell me the number of lots.

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The dress is chiffon material so soft, and finished up by the elegant pearl and lace. The empire dress characteristic with a big ribbon on the back, full of elegance princess! And also from "Sailormoon", a little soft make up and competed with the sparkling new moon on the forehead, very beautiful.
Of course it also packed with the unique element of "Pullip"! The pupils is moved left and right, wink and make various facial expression, bring the body move to the wide stage, it's possible to reproduce the pose during various play.

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The dress is made from soft chiffon and decorated with elegant pearls and lace. The big ribbon on the back is characteristic for empire dresses - doesn't she look like an elegant princess? Makeup (slightly softer from the Sailormoon version) and a sparkling crescent moon for the forehead make it a really lovely set.
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Of course, all elements characteristic for the Pullip dolls are here! The doll's pupils can be moved left and right, she can wink and make various facial expressions. Thanks to her fully poseable body, you can recreate many scenes with famous poses!

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Thank you for your reply.
I have chacked the inventory chart.

Please allow me to ask you, what are the discount rate from the prices listed here?
To me they all appear more expensive than those sold on Amazone. If Amazon sells them cheaper, we will order from there. However in that case the handling fee will be charged, so I don't see the merit for both of us.
Currently from the company we have business with, I purchase 8926OB as 50 pcs per case for $70.
We would like to purchase for a better price than this from you.

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Thank you for your reply.
I have checked the inventory chart.

Please allow me to ask you, what is the discount rate from the prices listed here?
To me they all appear more expensive than those sold on Amazon. If Amazon sells them cheaper, we will order from there. However in that case the handling fee will be charged, so I don't see the merit for both of us.
Currently from the company we have business with, I purchase 8926OB as 50 pcs per case for $70.
We would like to purchase for a better price than this from you.

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I’m also considering purchasing.
I have been waiting for a long while now. Do you think it’s possible to update only the CSS for responsive first?
I would appreciate it very much if you could do that as the next update seems be a long while away.

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I’m also considering purchasing it.
I have been waiting for a long while now. Do you think it’s possible to update only the CSS for responsive first?
I would appreciate it very much if you could do that as the next update seems be a long while away.

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Hello,
I am so happy you liked my last "green tea set."
I see you're buying it again. Thank you so much.
This is a present for your friend, right?
You can make an additional purchase to include a green tea tea cup (bowl) with it.
If I package it together with the item you're buying now then I can sell one tea cup (bowl) for $8.
I will send you the invoice from PayPal.
I will wait until Monday to hear back from you.
Would you prefer a blue tea cup or a white one?
Please let me know.

You may perhaps feel like it's a lot of money but this tea cup is fragile so some of the cost goes into the packaging.

I hope you have a good weekend.

Additional bowl priced at $8

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Hello,
I am so happy you liked my last "green tea set."
I see you're buying it again. Thank you so much.
This is a present for your friend, right?
You can make an additional purchase to include a green tea tea cup (bowl) with it.
If I package it together with the item you're buying now then I can sell one tea cup (bowl) for $8.
I will send you the invoice via PayPal.
I will wait until Monday to hear back from you.
Would you prefer a blue tea cup or a white one?
Please let me know.

You may perhaps feel like it's a lot of money but this tea cup is fragile so some of the cost goes into the packaging.

I hope you have a good weekend.

Additional bowl priced at $8.

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I've lived in Moscow and I wish to sell quality products to the Russians.
I'm truly sorry that you're not satisfied with the item.
I accept your return as a token of my apology.
I bare the return shipping fee so please send it back via airmail.
However, I know that shipping with Russian Post can be troublesome. If you wish to keep the item, I can also refund you $70 instead.
Please let me know whether you wish to keep or return the item.

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I used to live in Moscow and so I wish to sell quality products to the Russians.
I'm truly sorry that you're not satisfied with the item.
I accept your return as a token of my apology.
I will bear the return shipping fee so please send it back via airmail.
However, I know that shipping with Russian Post can be troublesome. If you wish to keep the item, I can also refund you $70 instead.
Please let me know whether you wish to keep or return the item.

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I manage an import company selling Japanese products.
I am looking for a private secretary who can translate from Japanese to English and vice versa.
Necessary skills:
Writing: English, Japanese
Reading: English, Japanese
Translation: English<>Japanese
Speaking: English

An ideal candidate can work 3-5 hours a day, but I would like to pay 500 dollars instead of an hourly wage.

During the test period, I will pay $100 a week to determine if you are suited for this position.

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I manage a Japan-based trading company selling Japanese products.
I am looking for a private secretary who can translate from Japanese to English and vice versa.
Necessary skills:
Writing: English, Japanese
Reading: English, Japanese
Translation: English<>Japanese
Speaking: English

An ideal candidate can work 3-5 hours a day, but I would like to pay 500 dollars per month instead of an hourly wage.

During the test period, I will pay $100 a week to determine if you are suited for this position.

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Thank you for your contact.

We shipped your item on January 18 via airmail (without tracking) by Japan Post, which should have reached you around January 28. Nowing that you have not received the item, we assume that it could be lost during transit or seized by the customs. We apologize for keeping you waiting for such a long time, and will send a same item to you by airmail, with tracking. We will let you know a tracking number after we post it. Thank you very much for your patience.

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Thank you for your contact.

We shipped your item on January 18 via airmail (without a tracking number) by Japan Post, which should have reached you around January 28. Knowing that you have not received the item, we assume that it might have been lost during transit or seized by the customs. We apologize for keeping you waiting for such a long time, and we will send the same item to you by airmail, this time with a tracking number. We will let you know the tracking number after we post it. Thank you very much for your patience.