Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ

翻訳者レビュー ( 英語 → 日本語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2016/05/11 15:26:14

shino0530
shino0530 50 海外企業で5年勤務した後、帰国して英会話講師を4年、その後翻訳業へ転職致し...
英語

レンタサイクルは全て売り切れました。電動バイクは在庫があります。
只今、自転車の返却状況を確認中です。お時間のある方はこちらを読んでお待ちください。すぐに戻ります。
自転車の右手のハンドルでギアの切り替えができます。
電動自転車を2日間レンタルしたお客様には、一度だけバッテリーの交換サービスを行います。
その時には、この白い小屋に来て頂ければ交換します。
ここに代表のお客様の名前と電話番号を書いてください。
電話番号が無ければ、お泊まりのホテルか民宿の名前を記入して下さい。

日本語

All the rent-a-bicycle has been sold out, but the electric motorcycle is still in stock.
Currently, we are checking the return status of the bicycle. Please wait for us reading this, if have time. We'll be back in a minute.
You may change the gear with the steering wheel of the right hand of the bicycle.
For the customers who rented an e-bike for two days, battery exchange service will be provided one time.
In this case, please visit this white hut to exchange the battery.
Please write down a phone number and name of the representative customer here.
If your phone number is not available, please fill in the name of a hotel or minshuku you are staying.

レビュー ( 1 )

mars16 60 翻訳を始めて、そしてConyacに参加して5年ほどになります(スタンダード...
mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2018/05/29 21:35:50

元の翻訳
All the rent-a-bicycle has been sold out, but the electric motorcycle is still in stock.
Currently, we are checking the return status of the bicycle. Please wait for us reading this, if have time. We'll be back in a minute.
You may change the gear with the steering wheel of the right hand of the bicycle.
For the customers who rented an e-bike for two days, battery exchange service will be provided one time.
In this case, please visit this white hut to exchange the battery.
Please write down a phone number and name of the representative customer here.
If your phone number is not available, please fill in the name of a hotel or minshuku you are staying.

修正後
All the rent-a-bicycles have been sold out, but the electric motorcycle is still in stock.
Currently, we are checking the return status of the bicycle. Please wait for us reading this, if you have time. We'll be back in a minute.
You may change the gear with the steering wheel of the right hand of the bicycle.
For the customers who rented an e-bike for two days, battery exchange service will be provided once.
In this case, please visit this white hut to exchange the battery.
Please write down a phone number and name of the representative customer here.
If your phone number is not available, please fill in the name of a hotel or minshuku you are staying.

shino0530 shino0530 2018/09/27 14:11:55

添削ありがとうございました!!

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