翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

DVDレコーダーの中からカラカラと音がしました。
音の原因はネジが1本外れていました。
私にはそのネジがどの部分のネジだかわかりません。
たぶんそれが故障の原因だと思いますが、DVDレコーダーは動きませんでした。

英語

I heard the strange sound from the DVD recorder.
Cause of sound was that screw was out of one.
I do not know whether it if for any part.
Perhaps it's the cause of the failure.
The DVD recorder did not work.

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ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/27 16:01:28

元の翻訳
I heard the strange sound from the DVD recorder.
Cause of sound was that screw was out of one.
I do not know whether it if for any part.
Perhaps it's the cause of the failure.
The DVD recorder did not work.

修正後
I heard the strange sound from the DVD recorder.
The cause of the sound was that screw came off from it.
I do not know from which part it came off.
Perhaps it's the cause of the failure.
The DVD recorder did not work.