翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

先日、1月分の請求書を送りましたがご確認頂けていますでしょうか？
また、先日お伝えした10月分の未払い分の金額については、その後いかがでしょうか？
1月が私たちの決算期であったため、こちらの経費処理が進められず困っております。
忙しいところ申し訳ありませんが、早急な対応をお願いします。

こちらの翻訳業務を完了しましたが、Errorメッセージが表示され、業務を完了することができません。完了作業をそちらにお任せしてもよろしいでしょうか？

よろしくお願いします。

英語

I sent you the January invoice the other day. Did you have a chance to look at it?
Also, how are things coming along regarding the unpaid amount from October which I told you about the other day?
January is our accounting period, and we are troubled by not being able to proceed with the processing of these expenses.
I am sorry to bother you while you are busy, but would appreciate it if you could deal with this as soon as possible.

I finished this translation work, but I got an error message and could not complete it. Is it OK if I leave it for you to complete?

Thank you.

レビュー ( 2 )

ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/06 19:47:41

良いと思います。

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/06 20:55:45

元の翻訳
I sent you the January invoice the other day. Did you have a chance to look at it?
Also, how are things coming along regarding the unpaid amount from October which I told you about the other day?
January is our accounting period, and we are troubled by not being able to proceed with the processing of these expenses.
I am sorry to bother you while you are busy, but would appreciate it if you could deal with this as soon as possible.

I finished this translation work, but I got an error message and could not complete it. Is it OK if I leave it for you to complete?

Thank you.

修正後
I sent you the January invoice the other day. Did you have a chance to look at it?
Also, how are things coming along regarding the unpaid amount from October which I told you about the other day?
January is our accounting period, and we are troubled by not being able to proceed with the processing of these expenses.
I am sorry to bother you while you are busy, but would appreciate it if you could deal with this as soon as possible.

I have finished my translation work, but I get an error message and cannot complete it. Is it OK if I leave it for you to complete?

Thank you.

「こちらの」はこの文脈では「わたしの」という意味だと思います。