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日本語

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他のお客様から配送状況を聞くところによると
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通常1ヶ月以内を目安に届くところが
2ヶ月程かかることもあるようです
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ご迷惑をお掛けしますが
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英語

Good day!

Thank you for your inquiry.
I have not received the items.
Have you received the items?
I am waiting for your confirmation.

Thank you for your purchase at our shop.
I would like to inform you that delivery are delayed due to holiday season according to the other customers.
It usually takes less than one month, but it may take about two months.
I will take care of this dealing till the end.

I apologize for my inconvenience caused by delay.
Please kindly wait for a while.

レビュー ( 1 )

soulsenseiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/12/24 14:16:13

元の翻訳
Good day!

Thank you for your inquiry.
I have not received the items.
Have you received the items?
I am waiting for your confirmation.

Thank you for your purchase at our shop.
I would like to inform you that delivery are delayed due to holiday season according to the other customers.
It usually takes less than one month, but it may take about two months.
I will take care of this dealing till the end.

I apologize for my inconvenience caused by delay.
Please kindly wait for a while.

修正後
Good day!

Thank you for your inquiry.
The items have not been returned to me.
Have you received the items yet?
I am waiting for your confirmation.

Thank you for your purchase at our shop.
Based on feedback from other customers, I would like to inform you that the delivery of items is delayed due to the holiday season.
Delivery usually takes less than one month, but it may take about two months now.
I will take care of this transaction till the end.

I apologize for any inconvenience caused by the delay.
Please kindly wait for a while.

Better to write "The items have not been returned to me." because "I have not received the items." makes it sound like you are also a buyer.