翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

返信が遅れて申し訳ございません。
先週UKに出張しておりました。
そしてまた来週から27日までヨーロッパ各地に出張する予定です。

御社との打合せの件ですが、11/28以降で候補日をいくつかいただけないでしょうか。
お会いできることを楽しみにしております。

英語

Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK for business trip last week.
And I will go to many places in Europe from next week to 27th.

About business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28th?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

レビュー ( 2 )

hitomi-kumaiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/14 18:31:52

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK for business trip last week.
And I will go to many places in Europe from next week to 27th.

About business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28th?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

修正後
Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK on business trip last week.
And I will visit several places in Europe on business from next week to 27th.

About a business meeting with you, could you arrange it on your available dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to meeting you.

There are a few basic mistakes.

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/14 19:43:41

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK for business trip last week.
And I will go to many places in Europe from next week to 27th.

About business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28th?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

修正後
Sorry for my late reply.
I was in UK on business last week.
And I will be flying back to other spots in Europe for another business trip next week till 27th.

About the business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

基本的な理解は間違っていないので、後は提出前の確認を徹底すればかなり精度が上がると思います。