翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

商品が無事に到着致しました。ありがとうございます。

しかし、出荷時に貼り付けてあるCommercial Invoiceの価格が正確ではありませんでした。
ファイルをアップロードしますので、ご確認下さい。

また、次回以降「Commercial Invoiceに正確な価格を記入して下さい。」と台湾の出荷担当者に再度お伝え下さい。

英語

The goods were safely arrived. Thank you very much.
But the price of Commercial Invoice on the delivery was not accurate.
Since the file is uploaded, please check.
In addition, "Please fill the exact price of Commercial Invoice" and tell the person in charge of shipping in Taiwan

レビュー ( 2 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/18 12:04:28

元の翻訳
The goods were safely arrived. Thank you very much.
But the price of Commercial Invoice on the delivery was not accurate.
Since the file is uploaded, please check.
In addition, "Please fill the exact price of Commercial Invoice" and tell the person in charge of shipping in Taiwan

修正後
The goods were safely arrived. Thank you very much.
But the price of the Commercial Invoice attached at shipment was not accurate.
I upload the file, so please check.
In addition, please remind the person in charge of shipping in Taiwan to "fill the correct price of the Commercial Invoice" from now on.

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2014/10/26 10:08:32

元の翻訳
The goods were safely arrived. Thank you very much.
But the price of Commercial Invoice on the delivery was not accurate.
Since the file is uploaded, please check.
In addition, "Please fill the exact price of Commercial Invoice" and tell the person in charge of shipping in Taiwan

修正後
The goods were safely arrived [why passive voice?]. Thank you very much.
But the price of [article missing] Commercial Invoice on the delivery [unnatural] was not accurate.
Since the file is uploaded [tense confusion, use active voice], please check [object missing].
In addition, "Please fill the exact price of Commercial Invoice" and tell the person in charge of shipping in Taiwan [extremely awkward].