Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ

翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/08/20 23:35:12

日本語

私は問屋にSUGIのロゴ入りのギグバッグの発注を済ませています。価格は$120ですがこれはご案内したとおり私から無料でプレゼントします。納期は9月上旬の予定ということしか今はまだ分かりません。はっきりした納期が分かりましたらご連絡します。

昨夜、私の町は大きな災害に襲われました。幸い私の家や家族は無事でした。今も死者や行方不明者がいて捜索が続いています。自然の大きな力の前には人間は無力です。

ご心配ありがとうございます。あなたの優しさにとても感謝します。

英語

I have made an order of gig bag with brand name SUGI to the dealer already. The price is $120 but as I have announced beforehand, it would be for free. It will arrive around early September but I'm still not sure. If I find out a definite date, I will let you know.

Last night, My town have been tormented by a natural disaster. Fortunately, my family and I were safe. There still are victims waiting to be found. In front of a natural disaster, humans are weak.

Thank you for your support. I appreciate your kindness.

レビュー ( 1 )

shihpin 61 (日本語は英語の後です。Japanese follows English ...
shihpinはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/22 08:08:07

元の翻訳
I have made an order of gig bag with brand name SUGI to the dealer already. The price is $120 but as I have announced beforehand, it would be for free. It will arrive around early September but I'm still not sure. If I find out a definite date, I will let you know.

Last night, My town have been tormented by a natural disaster. Fortunately, my family and I were safe. There still are victims waiting to be found. In front of a natural disaster, humans are weak.

Thank you for your support. I appreciate your kindness.

修正後
I have made an order of gig bag with brand name SUGI to the dealer already. The price is $120 but as I have announced beforehand, it would be for free. It will arrive around early September but I'm still not sure. If I find out a definite date, I will let you know.

Last night, My town have been tormented by a natural disaster. Fortunately, my family and I were safe. There still are victims waiting to be found. In front of a natural disaster, humans are powerless.

Thank you for your support. I appreciate your kindness.

「無力」という意味でweakよりpowerlessを使ったほうが良いと思います。

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