翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

日本人の多は8月中旬はとても長い休みを取ります。
聞いたところでは9日間とか長い人は14日間とか休みを取ります。
その休みを利用して日本人は一斉に自分の故郷に帰るんです。
自身の故郷や妻の故郷にも行きます。
子供が帰ってきた祖父や祖母はどこも大喜びです。

一斉に帰省したり旅行するので、いつも新幹線や飛行機は超満員です。高速道路は何十キロも
うんざりするほど渋滞です。もし外国の方が日本にくるなら8月中旬は避けた方が良いかもしれません。

日本語勉強されてるのですね。私も英語を勉強します。

英語

Many Japanese have a long vacation in middle August.
It usually about 9 days, the longest vacation even has 14 days.
They back to their hometown in the vacation, both themselves' and wives'.
Grandpas and grandmas are happy with the back of their grandchildren.

Shinkansen or flights are crowded with the Japanese who back to hometown in the same time.
Also there is a dozens of miles traffic jam on the highway.
I think it's better to come to Japan not in the middle August for foreigners .

You are studying Japanese, aren't you?
I am learning English too

レビュー ( 2 )

murasakilongはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/18 20:44:07

問題ないと思います。

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/09/18 09:15:37

元の翻訳
Many Japanese have a long vacation in middle August.
It usually about 9 days, the longest vacation even has 14 days.
They back to their hometown in the vacation, both themselves' and wives'.
Grandpas and grandmas are happy with the back of their grandchildren.

Shinkansen or flights are crowded with the Japanese who back to hometown in the same time.
Also there is a dozens of miles traffic jam on the highway.
I think it's better to come to Japan not in the middle August for foreigners .

You are studying Japanese, aren't you?
I am learning English too

修正後
Many Japanese have a long vacation in mid-August.
It usually [verb missing] about 9 days, the longest vacation even has 14 days.
They back [parts of speech confusion] to their hometown in the vacation, both themselves' and wives'.
Grandpas and grandmas are happy with the back of their grandchildren [mistranslation].

Shinkansen or flights are crowded with the Japanese who back [parts of speech confusion] to hometown in [wrong proposition] the same time.
Also there is a dozens of miles [ungrammatical] traffic jam on the highway.
I think it's better to come to Japan not in mid-August for foreigners [awkward].

You are studying Japanese, aren't you?
I am learning English too.

Many ESL errors