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評価: 68 / ネイティブ 英語 / 1 Review / 2014/08/12 08:19:07

katrina_z
katrina_z 68 こんにちは!はじめまして、チェコ在住のアメリカ英語のネイティブです。 日...
日本語

①お買い上げ頂きまして誠にありがとうございます。残念ながら現在夏休み中です。8月19日に戻りますので商品の発送は8月19日か20日になります。商品の発送が遅れるため、送料を$7値引きさせていただきます(入金後でもご返金いたします)。もしキャンセルしたい場合はご連絡ください。全額ご返金させていただきます。何卒ご理解いただけますようよろしくお願いいたします。
②残念ながら商品の在庫を切らしております。代理店が夏休みのため商品の発送が8月19日か8月20日になります。

英語

1.) Thank you for your purchase. Unfortunately, we are currently on summer vacation. We will return on August 19th so orders will be shipped on either the 19th or 20th. We will be giving you a $7 discount for shipping costs due to the fact that your order shipment is being delayed. (We will refund the cost even if you have already made the payment.) Please contact us if you wish to cancel your order. We will refund the full amount. We thank you very much for your understanding.
2.) Unfortunately we are currently out of stock for this item. Our distributor is currently on summer vacation so your order will ship on either August 19th or 20th.

レビュー ( 1 )

acdcasic 60 こんにちは、遠藤です。日⇔英訳対応が可能なバイリンガルで、翻訳歴は5年です...
acdcasicはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/13 14:50:41

元の翻訳
1.) Thank you for your purchase. Unfortunately, we are currently on summer vacation. We will return on August 19th so orders will be shipped on either the 19th or 20th. We will be giving you a $7 discount for shipping costs due to the fact that your order shipment is being delayed. (We will refund the cost even if you have already made the payment.) Please contact us if you wish to cancel your order. We will refund the full amount. We thank you very much for your understanding.
2.) Unfortunately we are currently out of stock for this item. Our distributor is currently on summer vacation so your order will ship on either August 19th or 20th.

修正後
1.) Thank you for your purchase. Unfortunately, we are currently on summer vacation. We will return on August 19th so your orders will be shipped on either the 19th or 20th. We will be giving you a $7 discount for shipping costs due to the fact that your order shipment is being delayed. (We will refund the cost even if you have already made the payment.) Please contact us if you wish to cancel your order. We will refund the full amount. We thank you very much for your understanding.
2.) Unfortunately we are currently out of stock for this item. Our distributor is currently on summer vacation so your order will ship on either August 19th or 20th.

ちょっと堅いですが内容は問題ないと思います

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