翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 2 Reviews / 2014/07/29 18:51:38

hideomi
hideomi 52
日本語

私首尾一貫して希望していることをを繰り返しておく。それは送料を含めた金額100%の返金である。ただし、そちらが希望するなら、着払いで返送を行う。届いたものは全てジャンク品であって、顧客を大切にするというなら、私の要求は真っ当であると確信している。

英語

I will re-announce what I have constantly want to do. It is that you pay back to me all the money including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want.
All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, my request is justified.

レビュー ( 2 )

yosuke-oshida 52 I've been interested in languages, le...
yosuke-oshidaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/30 21:32:30

元の翻訳
I will re-announce what I have constantly want to do. It is that you pay back to me all the money including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want.
All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, my request is justified.

修正後
I will re-announce you what I have constantly wanted, that is, 100% full refund including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want.
All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, I'm certain that my request is rightful.

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mars16 50 翻訳を始めて、そしてConyacに参加して5年ほどになります(スタンダード...
mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/30 21:33:13

元の翻訳
I will re-announce what I have constantly want to do. It is that you pay back to me all the money including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want.
All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, my request is justified.

修正後
I will re-announce what I have constantly want to do. It is that you pay back to me all the money including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want.
All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, my request is justified.

「返送を行う」の訳が「発送費を支払う」になっています。

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