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tylerbalaskovitz1はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/05 09:06:42

元の翻訳
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修正後
1. Thank you for your reply.
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I feel like you got the essence of the text, but phrased a few things slightly awkwardly in English. Good attempt, keep up the good work.

[tearz]

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