翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/06/19 12:41:48
[1]10/9(木)
成田(11:00〜18:30)発 (直行)空路にて、ニューヨークへ。
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ニューヨーク(10:45〜18:25)着後、現地係員と共にホテルまでお送りいたします。※ホテルチェックインは15時以降です
食事:朝× 昼× 夜×[ニューヨーク泊]
[2]10/10(金)
午前:NY COMIC CON(コミコン)会場へご案内
午後:自由行動となります。
食事:朝× 昼× 夜×[ニューヨーク泊]
[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30) for New York by air
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Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]
[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]
レビュー ( 1 )
元の翻訳
[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30) for New York by air
----- crossing International Date Line-----
Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]
[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]
修正後
[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30 JST) for New York by air
----- crossing International Date Line-----
Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25 EDT), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]
[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]
元の文章に問題があるのですが、時間は標準時を明記するといいでしょう。