翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

今の僕の幸せは、君の笑顔を見ることです。

もちろん、今後もその為の努力は怠らないし、君との約束「嘘をつかない」「浮気をしない」は守ります。

だから、これからの人生、ずっと僕の隣にいて、笑顔を見せて欲しい。
僕の幸せが一生続くように・・・・。

結婚してください。

英語

My present happiness is in looking you smiling.

Of course I will make every effort for that as well as keep the promise that I won't lie and never cheat on you.

So, would you keep staying by me with that smile for the rest of life.
Then I expect my happiness will be permanent...

Will you please marry me.

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natsukioはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/12 07:05:53

元の翻訳
My present happiness is in looking you smiling.

Of course I will make every effort for that as well as keep the promise that I won't lie and never cheat on you.

So, would you keep staying by me with that smile for the rest of life.
Then I expect my happiness will be permanent...

Will you please marry me.

修正後
My happiness is in looking you smiling.

Of course I will make every effort for that and I won't lie or ever cheat on you.

So, would you keep staying by me with that smile for the rest of my life?
Then I expect my happiness will be permanent...

Will you please marry me?