翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: お寺をガイドするときの説明です。

日本語

お寺です。今日見学するお寺はすべて日蓮宗の寺院です。日蓮宗は仏教の教えの一つ。その教えは、生きている間に正しい行いをたくさんしましょう。そうすれば、社会もよくなるし、あなた自身も幸せに近づきます。今を正しく生きましょう。死んだら天国に行くという概念とは異なります。「南妙法蓮華経」と唱えて祈ります。日蓮宗を最初に始めた人の宗教上の名前から来ています。その人の名は「日蓮」。ここは、この地域を治めていた池上宗仲(いけがみ むねなか)という人の館でした。日蓮がなくなったのは10月13

英語

A temple. All temple tour today is Nichiren religion temple. Nichiren religion is one of the Buddhism. Their teaching is do as many right thing while live. By following this path, society will becoming better and yourself also will find happiness. Lets do the right thing now. It is diffirent from the concept after death is going to heaven. Pray to advocates through "South Myoho Renge". Nichiren religion name came from the person who started this religion. The person name is "Nichiren". This is the museum of the Ikegami Munenaka who had rule this area. Nichiren passed away on October 13th.

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gorogoro13はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/10 20:56:52

元の翻訳
A temple. All temple tour today is Nichiren religion temple. Nichiren religion is one of the Buddhism. Their teaching is do as many right thing while live. By following this path, society will becoming better and yourself also will find happiness. Lets do the right thing now. It is diffirent from the concept after death is going to heaven. Pray to advocates through "South Myoho Renge". Nichiren religion name came from the person who started this religion. The person name is "Nichiren". This is the museum of the Ikegami Munenaka who had rule this area. Nichiren passed away on October 13th.

修正後
A temple. All the temple we will see today is Nichiren religion temple. Nichiren religion is one of the Buddhist sect. They teach us to do the right thing as many as you can while you alive. By following this path, society will become better place and your will find happiness. Let us do the right thing. It is diffirent from the concept that you were ensured to go to heaven after the death. They pray by chanting "South Myoho Renge". The name of Nichiren religion was originally come from the person who started this religion. The person named "Nichiren". This is the residence of the Ikegami Munenaka who had ruled this area. Nichiren passed away on October 13th 1282.

時勢の間違いや使われる単語の間違いも見受けられますが、読めます。

[gorogoro13]

as many as you can while you alive×
as much as you can while you alive

[gorogoro13]

society will become better place and your will find happiness×
society will become better place and you will find happiness

[jaypee]

コメントありがとうございます。一生懸命に動力しますので

[gorogoro13]

一生懸命に動力(どうりょく)しますので×

一生懸命に努力(どりょく)しますので○

頑張ってください。

[jaypee]

本当にありがとうございます。