仲谷 友孝 (tom00) — Received Reviews
ID Verified
About 6 years ago
Male
20s
Japan
Japanese (Native)
English
The reviewed activity that other translators made to this user's works. This activity includes writing corrections and comments to those translations.
rated this translation result as ★★★★
English → Japanese
10 Sep 2018 at 14:49
|
|
rated this translation result as ★★★★
English → Japanese
08 Sep 2018 at 18:22
|
|
Comment 原文に忠実に訳されています。1文ずつなら、丁寧な言葉遣いに好印象を覚えますが、文章になると、少し回りくどい感じがします。「~することができる」などの言い回しを工夫したり、読点を増やしたりすることで、ぐっと読みやすくなりますよ。 |