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仲谷 友孝 (tom00) Received Reviews

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About 6 years ago Male 20s
Japan
Japanese (Native) English

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lynts rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
10 Sep 2018 at 14:49
anri_hanahana rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
08 Sep 2018 at 18:22
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原文に忠実に訳されています。1文ずつなら、丁寧な言葉遣いに好印象を覚えますが、文章になると、少し回りくどい感じがします。「~することができる」などの言い回しを工夫したり、読点を増やしたりすることで、ぐっと読みやすくなりますよ。