石村達雄 (tatsuoishimura) Written Reviews

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Japan
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tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 13:34
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 15:31
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 20:30
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第一パラは、新人部員のことではないでしょうか。 「追加購入」は、「補充」がふつうかも、「補充はいかがでしょうか」という感じでは?「shipment」は、「出荷」と訳したい。 「今後発売予定のA-bodytool製品」は、a sneak peek at the A-bod...
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 16:51
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 21:08
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 23:06
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 22:59
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 22:44
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 20:42
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「工場でQuarryの製造を開始し」は、(輸入パーツを使うので)Portland, OR に移した(brought, 持ってきた)という感じが欲しい。 「previously worn」は、前もって履きつぶしたという感じ。 「長く履いていただくために」は、「長く履いてい...
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 17:28
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
19 Mar 2015 at 19:38
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
16 Mar 2015 at 21:14
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as English → Japanese
20 Mar 2015 at 08:50
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
15 Mar 2015 at 03:12
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
15 Mar 2015 at 08:10
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「顧客分析」は、顧客解析(論)が一般的、「とともに」は、と連携して、「従事してきた」は、専心してきた、「行為を操り」は、行動を駆り立て(に移し、を実行する)がベターでは。書名の括弧は、“ウェブ解析論のアクション・ヒーロー”。
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
15 Mar 2015 at 08:52
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
15 Mar 2015 at 05:59
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
08 Mar 2015 at 10:38
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とても良いと思います。原文の「in state」が訳に漏れているのでは?「静かに、おもむろに」などと訳せるかもしれません。 
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
08 Mar 2015 at 10:48
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問題ないと思います。
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
08 Mar 2015 at 11:05
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
09 Mar 2015 at 01:31
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「アプリ内購入」は、アプリ内課金の訳あり、「ネイティブ広告について」は、ネイティブ広告フロント(の場)では、「開発に参加している人」は、参加する開発者、「ベータ版としてテスト」は、ベータ版でテスト、ではどうでしょう。
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
08 Mar 2015 at 13:27
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
08 Mar 2015 at 11:50
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
08 Mar 2015 at 11:25
tatsuoishimura rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
25 Feb 2015 at 19:16