Kent Hirakawa (pawzcrew) — Received Reviews

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こんにちは。
商品は税関で引っかかって為、遅れてしまいました。ただ、昨日の時点で最寄りｎPurolator事務所にある事が確認できています。引き換え用のタグがお客様のメールボックス内、もしくは表に貼られていると思います。

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こんにちは。
商品は税関で引っかかった為、遅れてしまいました。ただ、昨日の時点で最寄りのPurolator事務所にある事が確認できています。引き換え用のタグはお客様のメールボックス内にあるか、もしくは表に貼られていると思います。

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I would like to purchase your item but I am unable to participate in the auction.
I want to place a bid from Japan. Can you change the condition so I may place a bid?

Thank you very much.

Is this the new model? Or, the price for the old model?

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Hello. I would like to purchase your item but I am unable to participate in the auction.
I want to place a bid from Japan. Can you change the condition so I may place a bid?

Thank you very much.

Is this the new model? Or, the price for the old model?

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Tanuwijaya氏は立ち上げ以来、成長を続けているこの会社は、毎月３百万件の訪問があると話しています。去年は1340万個もの商品がマーケットプレースを通じて取引されています。

これは我々が11月21日、22日に開催されるStartup Asia Jakarta 2013の報告の一部です。Startup Arenaの残りの報告はこちらまで。Twitterは@TechinAsia、それとFacebookページでフォロー出来ます。↵

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Tanuwijaya氏は立ち上げ以来、成長を続けているこの会社のサイトには、毎月３百万件の訪問があると話している。去年は1340万個もの商品がマーケットプレースを通じて取引された。

これは11月21日、22日に開催されるStartup Asia Jakarta 2013の報告の一部だ。Startup Arenaの残りの報告はこちらで。Twitterは@TechinAsia、それとFacebookページでフォロー出来る。

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インドネシアのＣ２ＣマーケットプレイスをリードするTokopediaの価値は2千億ドルです。

2009年に立ち上げられたインドネシアの人気Ｃ２ＣマーケットプレイスTokopediaは2千億ドルの価値があるとＣＥＯのWilliam Tanuwijaya氏が今朝Startup Asia Jakarta 2013で公表しました。

Tech and Asiaの創立者Willis Wee氏との対談でTanuwijaya氏は会社はまだ利益が出ていないと説明し、参加企業からは利用料を請求していないと話ました。

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インドネシアのＣ２ＣマーケットプレイスをリードするTokopediaの価値は2千億ドル

2009年に立ち上げられたインドネシアの人気Ｃ２ＣマーケットプレイスTokopediaは2千億ドルの価値があるとＣＥＯのWilliam Tanuwijaya氏が今朝Startup Asia Jakarta 2013で公表した。

Tech and Asiaの創立者Willis Wee氏との対談でTanuwijaya氏は会社はまだ利益が出ていないと説明し、参加企業からは利用料を請求していないと話した。↵

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その代わりに、主な収入は広告によるもので、お金を払って加入する売り手の店舗管理を補助する特別な管理サービスとして新しく立ち上げられるゴールド・マーチャント・プログラムが新たな収入源となる事に期待が寄せられています。Tanuwijaya氏は既に５から１０％の売り手がこのプログラムに加入していると話しています。

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その代わりに、主な収入は広告によるもので、お金を払って加入する売り手の店舗管理を補助する特別な管理サービスとして新しく立ち上げられるゴールド・マーチャント・プログラムが新たな収入源となる事に期待が寄せられている。Tanuwijaya氏は既に５から１０％の売り手がこのプログラムに加入していると話している。↵

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To improve the Post Active Rate, focusing on the 2 points of "Improving the quality of the posted contents" and Increase in high active users" are necessary.

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To improve the Post Active Rate, focusing on the 2 points which are "Improving the quality of the posted contents" and Increase in high active users" are necessary.

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If we take the previous page in to account, to improve the reach ratio, the Edge Rank must be improved. To improve the Edge Rank, engagement with each user, in other words, improving of Post Active Rate is needed.

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If we take the previous page into account, to improve the reach ratio the Edge Rank must be improved. To do this, engagement with each user, in other words, improving the Post Active Rate, is needed.

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Are my english in the e-mails and manuals I provided to you so bad that you are not able to understand them?
If you are not able to understand my english, it would be very difficult for us to understand each other.
The item you put up for sale does not display item description, method of shipping nor method of payment.
What is your purchasing guideline if you were making a purchase on online shops like ebay?
Would you make a purchase based on title and one picture?
What would you do if after purchasing, the size or quality was different from what you envisioned?
If it was ebay, it would be returned. I would pay for the shipping as well.

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Is my English in the e-mails and manuals I provided to you so bad that you are not able to understand them?
If you are not able to understand my English, it would be very difficult for us to communicate with each other.
The item you put up for sale does not display item description, method of shipping nor method of payment.
What is your purchasing guideline if you were making a purchase on online shops like ebay?
Would you make a purchase based on title and one picture?
What would you do if after purchasing, the size or quality was different from what you had envisioned?
If it was on ebay, it would definitely be returned. I would have to pay for the shipping as well.

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How are you doing?
I understand you are not able to ship this item to Japan.
But to just trash the item seems really wasteful.
I'm thinking of sending back to the manufacture.
In the past, I have experience in sending items back to the manufacture.
Could you please explain why you are not able to send the item back to the seller?

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Hello?
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I understand you are not able to ship this item to Japan.
But to just trash the item seems really wasteful.
I want to send back the item to the manufacturer.
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Until now, I have experienced of returning items to the seller several times.
Could you please explain why the returning of the product to the seller is not possible?

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I am considering the purchase of the following item.
URL:
Item Name :
-Question is about shipping.
Would it be possible to have you use our FEDEX account for shipping?
Shipping address will be Japan.
-Question about pricing
Is there a volume discount?
We are considering purchasing about 20 pieces and plan on make more purchases in the future.
We would like to make the purchase soon so your prompt response is greatly appreciated.

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I am considering the purchase of the following item.
URL:
Item Name :
-Question about shipping.
Would it be possible to have you use our FEDEX account for shipping?
Shipping address will be Japan.
-Question about price
Is there a volume discount?
We are considering purchasing about 20 pieces and plan to make more purchases in the future.
We would like to make the purchase soon so your prompt response is greatly appreciated.