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rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French 11 Feb 2014 at 23:18
Comment 丁寧な訳、ただ少し不自然なところが。 En signe de　ではなく en guise de ですね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 01 Aug 2013 at 07:28
Comment good

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 16 Aug 2014 at 09:46
original １０. 計画を立案し、目標を設定するークライアントと共に効果的なコーチング計画を展開し、維持する能力とは a. 集められた情報を統合し、クライアントの関心事、学習と成長の主な領域を扱うコーチング計画と成長目標を確立すること b. 達成可能で見通しのきく、明確な成果があり、目標の期日がある計画を作ること c. コーチング過程や状況変化に応じて、計画の調整をすること d. クライアントが学習の為の様々な情報源をつきとめたり、そこに到達したりする手助けをすること（例：本、他の専門家） e. クライアントにとって重要な、近い将来の成功とは何かを確認し、目標とすること	corrected １０. 計画立案と目標設定－クライアントと共に効果的なコーチング計画を展開し、維持する能力 a. 集められた情報を統合し、クライアントの関心事、学習と成長の主な領域を扱うコーチング計画と成長目標を確立すること b. 達成可能で見通しのきく、明確な成果があり、目標の期日がある計画を作ること c. コーチング過程や状況変化に応じて、計画の調整をすること d. クライアントが学習の為の様々な情報源をつきとめたり、そこに到達したりする手助けをすること（例：本、他の専門家） e. クライアントにとって重要な、近い将来の成功とは何かを確認し、目標とすること

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

16 Aug 2014 at 09:46

original
１０. 計画を立案し、目標を設定するークライアントと共に効果的なコーチング計画を展開し、維持する能力とは

a. 集められた情報を統合し、クライアントの関心事、学習と成長の主な領域を扱うコーチング計画と成長目標を確立すること
b. 達成可能で見通しのきく、明確な成果があり、目標の期日がある計画を作ること
c. コーチング過程や状況変化に応じて、計画の調整をすること
d. クライアントが学習の為の様々な情報源をつきとめたり、そこに到達したりする手助けをすること（例：本、他の専門家）
e. クライアントにとって重要な、近い将来の成功とは何かを確認し、目標とすること

corrected
１０. 計画立案と目標設定－クライアントと共に効果的なコーチング計画を展開し、維持する能力

a. 集められた情報を統合し、クライアントの関心事、学習と成長の主な領域を扱うコーチング計画と成長目標を確立すること
b. 達成可能で見通しのきく、明確な成果があり、目標の期日がある計画を作ること
c. コーチング過程や状況変化に応じて、計画の調整をすること
d. クライアントが学習の為の様々な情報源をつきとめたり、そこに到達したりする手助けをすること（例：本、他の専門家）
e. クライアントにとって重要な、近い将来の成功とは何かを確認し、目標とすること

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 23 Jul 2013 at 11:10
original "Musen-mai" is pre-washed rice ready to be cooked without washing. This is Akita Komachi brand rice, which is cultivated with an extremely reduced amount of agricultural chemicals. Here I am showing you a recipe where anyone can easily cook delicious rice. You will enjoy the real Japanese taste, which is almost the same as you have in Japan. 1. Put this rice into a rice cooker with 500ml of cold mineral water. 2. Wait for 30 minutes. 3. Turn on the rice cooker. The key points are: cold mineral water and waiting for 30 minutes.	corrected "Musen-mai" is pre-washed rice ready to be cooked without washing. This is Akita Komachi brand rice, which is cultivated with an extremely reduced amount of agricultural chemicals. Here I am showing you a recipe where anyone can easily cook delicious rice. You will enjoy the real Japanese taste, which is almost the same as you would have in Japan. 1. Put this rice into a rice cooker with 500ml of cold mineral water. 2. Wait for 30 minutes. 3. Turn on the rice cooker. The key points are: cold mineral water and waiting for 30 minutes.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English

23 Jul 2013 at 11:10

original
"Musen-mai" is pre-washed rice ready to be cooked without washing.

This is Akita Komachi brand rice, which is cultivated with an extremely reduced amount of agricultural chemicals.

Here I am showing you a recipe where anyone can easily cook delicious rice. You will enjoy the real Japanese taste, which is almost the same as you have in Japan.

1. Put this rice into a rice cooker with 500ml of cold mineral water.
2. Wait for 30 minutes.
3. Turn on the rice cooker.

The key points are: cold mineral water and waiting for 30 minutes.

corrected
"Musen-mai" is pre-washed rice ready to be cooked without washing.

This is Akita Komachi brand rice, which is cultivated with an extremely reduced amount of agricultural chemicals.

Here I am showing you a recipe where anyone can easily cook delicious rice. You will enjoy the real Japanese taste, which is almost the same as you would have in Japan.

1. Put this rice into a rice cooker with 500ml of cold mineral water.
2. Wait for 30 minutes.
3. Turn on the rice cooker.

The key points are: cold mineral water and waiting for 30 minutes.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 17 Jul 2013 at 23:58
Comment よいと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Aug 2013 at 14:35
Comment 良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 21 Jan 2014 at 11:44
original Some parts of the story didn't convince me though I enjoyed seeing how a new soldier grew up to become a veteran. After all, experience makes a man a first-rate soldier. By the way, I'm wondering if restaurants abroad charge tea after meal. Well, in Japan, at a certain TV personality chef's restaurant, it seems they charge you for water you didn't order.	corrected Some parts of the story didn't convince me though I enjoyed seeing how a new soldier grew up to become a veteran. After all, experience makes a man a first-rate soldier. By the way, I'm wondering if restaurants abroad charge for tea after a meal. Well, in Japan, at a certain TV personality chef's restaurant, it seems they charge you for water you didn't order.

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