mari (mari127) — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 14 May 2014 at 16:50
original There are several patterns in the movement, and it is difficult to determine which one it is, so it is important that you try again and again patiently. In a coterie magazine, she is usually drawn with the Moriya shirine dwellers, so that they are often called "The Moriya family". There are stories about them fighting with the Hakurei shrine or getting along with specters in the mountain and so, and there are a wide varaiety of the stories. Other characters that she often accompanies are, Sanae Kochiya, Suwako Moriya and Byakuren Hijiri.	corrected There are several patterns in the movement, and it is difficult to determine which one it is. As a result, it is important that you try again and again patiently. In a coterie magazine, she is usually drawn with the Moriya shrine dwellers, so that they are often called "The Moriya family". There are a wide variety of stories, including their fighting with the Hakurei shrine and getting along with specters in the mountain. Other characters that she often accompanies are Sanae Kochiya, Suwako Moriya and Byakuren Hijiri.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

14 May 2014 at 16:50

original
There are several patterns in the movement, and it is difficult to determine which one it is, so it is important that you try again and again patiently.

In a coterie magazine, she is usually drawn with the Moriya shirine dwellers, so that they are often called "The Moriya family".

There are stories about them fighting with the Hakurei shrine or getting along with specters in the mountain and so, and there are a wide varaiety of the stories.

Other characters that she often accompanies are, Sanae Kochiya, Suwako Moriya and Byakuren Hijiri.

corrected
There are several patterns in the movement, and it is difficult to determine which one it is. As a result, it is important that you try again and again patiently.

In a coterie magazine, she is usually drawn with the Moriya shrine dwellers, so that they are often called "The Moriya family".

There are a wide variety of stories, including their fighting with the Hakurei shrine and getting along with specters in the mountain.

Other characters that she often accompanies are Sanae Kochiya, Suwako Moriya and Byakuren Hijiri.

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