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chungpearl — Received Reviews

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chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
15 Jul 2014 at 15:46
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GJ
ryojiyono rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
11 Jul 2014 at 16:53
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GJ!
mirror1000 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
10 Jul 2014 at 21:02

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With a dramatic rise of Japanese yen after Plaza Accord in 1985 and the dramatic fall in price of petroleum in the following year, the consumption pattern of energy in Japan has changed. Rise of Japanese yen has changed Japanese economy to a domestic‐demand‐oriented economy, recession caused by strong yen has resulted in the decline of energy consumption. However, with housing and consumer durables has been expanded due to bubble economy from the late 80s, domestic energy consumption has actually increased. The increase in size and multi-functionalization in consumer electronics, and diffusion rate has risen. The number of possession of air conditioners has also hugely increased. Supply of power, hot‐water supply system and air conditioning has an obvious growth in the field of domestic energy consumption, while kitchen-use and heating system has a decreasing usage in the same field.

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With a dramatic rise of Japanese yen after Plaza Accord in 1985 and the dramatic fall in price of petroleum in the following year, the consumption pattern of energy in Japan has changed. Rise of Japanese yen has changed Japanese economy to a domestic‐demand‐oriented economy, recession caused by strong yen has resulted in the decline of energy consumption. However, with housing and consumer durables have been expanded due to the bubble economy from the late 80s, domestic energy consumption has actually increased. The increase in size and multi-functionalization in consumer electronics, and diffusion rate have risen. The number of possession of air conditioners has also hugely increased. Supply of power, hot‐water supply system and air conditioning have an obvious growth in the field of domestic energy consumption, while kitchen-use and heating system have a decreasing usage in the same field.