Naomie (carciofi) Written Reviews

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Almost 7 years ago
Japan
Japanese (Native) English
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carciofi rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
01 Sep 2018 at 12:55
Comment
自然で読みやすく、素晴らしいと思います。
carciofi rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
28 Aug 2018 at 23:21
carciofi rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
15 Aug 2018 at 15:26
Comment
ビジネス文書にしては、少し言葉の使い回しがくだけすぎている印象です。 なお、「sign up」は登録や契約を申し込もうとする動作に使い、「署名をする」動作そのものは直接的には表していません。「署名をする」の意味で「sign」を使う場合は「up」がつきません。
carciofi rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
15 Aug 2018 at 16:11
carciofi rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
15 Aug 2018 at 17:08
carciofi rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese
18 Aug 2018 at 09:45
Comment
最初の段落5行のうち、下2行の訳が抜けてしまっているようです。