Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

はい私は新しいモデルの商品が欲しい。
すぐに　クーポンコードを送って下さい。

お菓子届いたんですね
日本の王室でも食べられている京都の有名なお菓子です。
みなさんで召しあがって下さい。

これからもあなた方とたくさん取引をしたい。
これからもよろしく。

English

Yes, I would like a new model product.
Please send me a coupon code as soon as possible.

It seems like you have received the sweets.
They are a famous sweets from Kyoto, which are also eaten by Japanese imperial family.
Please enjoy them with everybody.

I would like to have many transactions with you in the future.
I will be counting on you.

Reviews ( 1 )

hitomi-kumai rated this translation result as ★★★ 19 Feb 2015 at 05:25

original
Yes, I would like a new model product.
Please send me a coupon code as soon as possible.

It seems like you have received the sweets.
They are a famous sweets from Kyoto, which are also eaten by Japanese imperial family.
Please enjoy them with everybody.

I would like to have many transactions with you in the future.
I will be counting on you.

corrected
Yes, I would like a new model of the product.
Please send me a coupon code as soon as possible.

It seems like you have received the sweets.
They are famous sweets of Kyoto, which are also served to the Japanese imperial family.
Please share them.

I would like to have more business with you in the future.
Thank you in advance.