Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 52 / Native Chinese (Simplified) / 1 Review / 06 Sep 2014 at 16:14

Japanese

メンバーは「日本に滞在し本格的に活動出来ることが嬉しいです。ファンの皆さんに沢山逢えることも楽しみです!早く日本語を覚えてドームでワンマンライブをするのが夢。」と日本活動への意欲を語る。

English

The members talking the willingness about the activities in Japan is that, they are glad to stay in Japan and can do activities in full-scale, and also looking forward to meet lots of fans. The dream is remembering Japanese soon and doing one-man live at dome.

Reviews ( 1 )

mars16 50 翻訳を始めて、そしてConyacに参加して5年ほどになります(スタンダード...
mars16 rated this translation result as ★★★ 08 Sep 2014 at 12:44

original
The members talking the willingness about the activities in Japan is that, they are glad to stay in Japan and can do activities in full-scale, and also looking forward to meet lots of fans. The dream is remembering Japanese soon and doing one-man live at dome.

corrected
The members talking the willingness about the activities in Japan is that, they are glad to stay in Japan and can do activities in full-scale, and also looking forward to meet lots of fans. The dream is learning Japanese soon and doing their own live at dome.

原文と同じ、直接話法の方がいいように思います。

hana2525 hana2525 08 Sep 2014 at 12:53

mars16さん、レビューありがとうございました。そうですね。自分もそうだとおもいます。learningを使いたかったけど、、、their own、いいですね。大変勉強になりました。また、宜しくお願い致します。

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