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Japanese

本日の午後、銀行を訪問しました。　
当初、銀行側はウガンダ向け中古車のUSD小切手は偽造の割合が９０％を超えていることを理由に正式な受付を拒否しました。その後、交渉の結果、添付ファイルのとおり、本日付で小切手の取立てを正式に受付しました。
しかし、現地、Wells　Fargo　N.A　銀行への確認と当社資金化には3週間程度かかると言われました。
当社はあくまで資金化を確認するまでは、船積みの準備をしませんのでご了承ください。
また、もし偽造小切手であった場合、当社は法的に対処します。

English

We have visited the bank at this afternoon.　
In the beginning at bank, USD check of second mobile for UGANDA.
Have refused the formal acceptance, because of counterfeiting percentage is under on over 90%. and then, the negotiation result have attachment file, and I have accepted check collection formally at this day.
But, the actual, for our monetize and checking at Wells Fargo N.A bank, have been said as have 3 weeks grade.
The company, until check only the monetize, you can note don't prepare the shipping.
And then, our company will deal legally if there is counterfeiting.

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[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★ 14 Aug 2014 at 14:32

original
We have visited the bank at this afternoon.　
In the beginning at bank, USD check of second mobile for UGANDA.
Have refused the formal acceptance, because of counterfeiting percentage is under on over 90%. and then, the negotiation result have attachment file, and I have accepted check collection formally at this day.
But, the actual, for our monetize and checking at Wells Fargo N.A bank, have been said as have 3 weeks grade.
The company, until check only the monetize, you can note don't prepare the shipping.
And then, our company will deal legally if there is counterfeiting.

corrected
We have visited [tense confusion, use simple past instead] the bank this afternoon.　
At first at bank, USD check of second mobile for UGANDA [fragment].
[Subject missing] Have refused [tense confusion] the formal acceptance, because of counterfeiting percentage is under on over 90% [what does this mean?]. and then, the negotiation result have attachment file [unreadable], and I have accepted check collection formally at this day.
But, the actual, for our monetize and checking at Wells Fargo N.A bank, have been said as have 3 weeks grade.
The company, until check only the monetize, you can note don't prepare the shipping.
And then, our company will deal legally if there is counterfeiting.

Too many ESL issues.

[santytha]

Thanks a lot for the correction.