Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

ここにいる皆さんは、営業だと思いますが、
営業の仕事をしていると、絶対に“避けては通れない事”がありますよね？

何だと思いますか？

それは、お客様からの、クレームです。

皆さん、クレームやトラブルは嫌ですか？

誰だって、お客様からのお叱りは、本当に嫌です。

もちろん、私も今まで様々なクレームとトラブルを経験してきました。

クレーム処理は確かに大変です。ですが、同時にチャンスでもあるんですよ！

たとえば、お客様から「ここの翻訳の文章は、直訳すぎる。もっと目を惹く翻訳の文章にしてほしかった。

English

I assume that everyone in here is a sales rep and there is there is always something that a sales rep cannot avoid.

That is a customer complaint.

Do you hate receiving complaints from your customers?

We all really hate to receive severe dressing-downs from our customers.

Ofcourse, I have experienced so many different customer complaints and troubles.

The complaints are indeed very difficult to deal with, but they are also a chance to flourish your business!

For example, if a customer complains "Your translation is too direct. I wanted something more appealing to the readers.

Reviews ( 1 )

acdcasic rated this translation result as ★★★★ 12 Aug 2014 at 00:49

original
I assume that everyone in here is a sales rep and there is there is always something that a sales rep cannot avoid.

That is a customer complaint.

Do you hate receiving complaints from your customers?

We all really hate to receive severe dressing-downs from our customers.

Ofcourse, I have experienced so many different customer complaints and troubles.

The complaints are indeed very difficult to deal with, but they are also a chance to flourish your business!

For example, if a customer complains "Your translation is too direct. I wanted something more appealing to the readers.

corrected
I assume that everyone in here is a sales rep and there is always something that a sales rep cannot avoid.

What do you think it is?↵
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It is customer complaint.

Do you hate receiving complaints from your customers?

We all really hate to receive severe dressing-downs from our customers.

Of course, I have experienced so many different customer complaints and troubles.

The complaints are indeed very difficult to deal with, but they are also a chance to flourish your business!

For example, if a customer complains "Your translation is too direct. I wanted something more appealing to the readers.

a を外して一般的なcomplaintにしました。本当は複数形が一番自然ですが、一文目がThere IS だったので、aを外すという選択肢をとりました。

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評価とコメントありがとうございます。なんと、重大な訳抜けが。。。直して頂いて感謝します。確かに、It is customer complaintのほうが自然ですね。特にスピーチ原稿となると余計にそう思います。とても勉強になりました。これからもよろしくお願いいたします。