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Japanese

私は商品を間違えて注文してしまいました。
注文をキャンセルしたいです。

しかし、すでに商品は発送済みとなっているので、こちらでキャンセルすることができません。
商品が指定した住所に届く前に、注文のキャンセルをして頂きたいです。
つまり、そちらの方で商品の配送を止めて欲しいということです。

私が提供できる情報は下記のとおりです。
注文番号：yyyyyyyy
追跡番号：xxxxxxxx

よろしくお願い致します。

English

I have ordered a wrong item, so I would like to cancel it.

However since it is already shipped, there is no way I could cancel the order.
Could you please cancel before the item is delivered to the specified address?
In other words, I would like you to stop the delivery at your end.

I can provide you the below address:
Order #: yyyyyyy
Tracking #: xxxxxxxxxx

Thank you and best regards,

Reviews ( 1 )

lebron_2014 rated this translation result as ★★★ 25 Jun 2014 at 02:09

original
I have ordered a wrong item, so I would like to cancel it.

However since it is already shipped, there is no way I could cancel the order.
Could you please cancel before the item is delivered to the specified address?
In other words, I would like you to stop the delivery at your end.

I can provide you the below address:
Order #: yyyyyyy
Tracking #: xxxxxxxxxx

Thank you and best regards,

corrected
I have ordered the item by mistake so I would like to cancel it.

However, since it has already been shipped, there is no way I could cancel the order.
Could you please make the cancellation before the item is delivered to the specified address?
In other words, I would like you to stop the delivery from your end.

I can provide you the following information:
Order #: yyyyyyy
Tracking #: xxxxxxxxxx

Thank you and best regards,

ordering a wrong item (item is wrong) and ordered an item by mistake (action is wrong) are a bit different. There shouldn't be a comma before"so".