Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: アーティスト名は「Cheeky Parade」に統一下さい。全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。

Japanese

＜イベント対象商品＞
6/18（水）発売ミニアルバム「Together」Loppi・HMV限定盤（AVC1-39164）、CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

※店舗でお渡しする「イベント整理券」と、初回盤CDに封入されている「握手会イベント参加券」の2枚ともなければ、
イベントにご参加いただけません。握手会の際に、回収させていただきます。
※下記集合時間にお集まりいただき、整列いただきます。
※握手会は列が途切れましたら終了させていただきます。

English

<Applicable event items>
Mini album released on Wed 6/18 "Together" Loppi/HMV limited version（AVC1-39164）, CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

*Your participation will be rejected if both tickets "Numbered event ticket" and "Handshaking event participation ticket" as a set. These tickets will be collected at the handshaking event.
*Please assemble on the below scheduled time and line in the queue.
*The handshaking event will be finished once the queue ends.

Reviews ( 1 )

im_yuki rated this translation result as ★★★★ 27 Jun 2014 at 13:57

original
<Applicable event items>
Mini album released on Wed 6/18 "Together" Loppi/HMV limited version（AVC1-39164）, CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

*Your participation will be rejected if both tickets "Numbered event ticket" and "Handshaking event participation ticket" as a set. These tickets will be collected at the handshaking event.
*Please assemble on the below scheduled time and line in the queue.
*The handshaking event will be finished once the queue ends.

corrected
<Applicable event items>
Mini album released on Wed 6/18 "Together" Loppi/HMV limited version（AVC1-39164）, CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

*Your participation will be rejected if both tickets "Numbered event ticket" and "Handshaking event participation ticket" are not presented as a set. These tickets will be collected at the handshaking event.
*Please assemble at the scheduled time below and join the queue.
*The handshaking event will be finished once the queue ends.

Pretty good, needed to put that tickets needed to be presented together. as for "join the queue" I don't typically use "queue" but this sounds natural to me. Good job!