Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

［1］10/9（木）
成田（11:00〜18:30）発 （直行）空路にて、ニューヨークへ。
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ニューヨーク（10：45〜18：25）着後、現地係員と共にホテルまでお送りいたします。※ホテルチェックインは15時以降です
食事：朝× 昼× 夜×［ニューヨーク泊］

［2］10/10（金）
午前：NY COMIC CON（コミコン）会場へご案内
午後：自由行動となります。
食事：朝× 昼× 夜×［ニューヨーク泊］

English

[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30) for New York by air
----- crossing International Date Line-----
Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

Reviews ( 1 )

susumu-fukuhara rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 19 Jun 2014 at 12:45

original
[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30) for New York by air
----- crossing International Date Line-----
Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

corrected
[1] Thursday 10/9
Depart Narita (11:00- 18:30 JST) for New York by air
----- crossing International Date Line-----
Arrive at New York (10:45- 18:25 EDT), then local assistant will take you to the hotel. *Check-in time is after 15:00.
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

[2] Friday 10/10
AM: Visit to NY COMIC CON
PM: Free time
Meals: Breakfast 0, Lunch 0, Dinner 0 [Stay over in New York]

元の文章に問題があるのですが、時間は標準時を明記するといいでしょう。