Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 50 / 2 Reviews / 13 May 2014 at 13:38

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[deleted user] 50 母国ウイグル語以外、中国語(Nativeレベル)、日本語、英語が堪能です。...
Japanese

×××様
ご連絡ありがとうございました。
当方からは、日本におけるこれらの用語の運用状況について、簡単なプレゼンテーションをしたいと思います。
私自身は、今年の4月からこの業界で仕事を始めたということもあり、不慣れな点が多々あるかとは存じます。何かとご迷惑をおかけすることとは思いますが、宜しくお願いいたします。
会合でお会いできるのを楽しみにしております。

English

Mr./Ms.
Thanks for your Email.
I thinking a easy presentation of about operational this terms .
I started this job from this April with less experienced in myself.
However, I give apologize if there some inconvenience to you and looking forward to see you soon.

Sincerely.

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★ 13 May 2014 at 14:07

original
Mr./Ms.
Thanks for your Email.
I thinking a easy presentation of about operational this terms .
I started this job from this April with less experienced in myself.
However, I give apologize if there some inconvenience to you and looking forward to see you soon.

Sincerely.

corrected
Mr./Ms.
Thanks for contacting us.
I am thinking of giving you a brief presentation on the use of these terms .
I started this job from this April with less experienced in myself.
However, I give apologize if there some inconvenience to you and looking forward to see you soon.

Sincerely.

I have not been able to correct all of the mistakes but there are many points that you should be careful in terms of grammar.

[deleted user] [deleted user] 13 May 2014 at 14:48

Thank you very much for your review and correcting my mistakes . I will make effort on my grammar.
Thanks

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[deleted user] 55 アメリカ大手販売サイトの商品詳細、マニュアル、カスタマーサポート(日英 英...
[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ 15 May 2014 at 01:16

original
Mr./Ms.
Thanks for your Email.
I thinking a easy presentation of about operational this terms .
I started this job from this April with less experienced in myself.
However, I give apologize if there some inconvenience to you and looking forward to see you soon.

Sincerely.

corrected
Mr./Ms.
Thank you for your Email.
I am thinking of an easy presentation of about operational this terms .
I started this job from this April with less experienced in myself.
However, I give apologize if there some inconvenience to you and looking forward to seeing you soon.

Sincerely.

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