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Rating: 61 / Native Japanese / 1 Review / 07 May 2014 at 20:04

bon_usa
bon_usa 61 イギリスやスペインにも住んでおりました。語学を学ぶのが大好きです。
Japanese

新宿センタービルの前庭である。木の成長を見てもらいたい1986年に撮影のモノクロにくらべ2011年撮影のカラーは格段に太くなっている。25年経っていても根本的な木の形は変わらないようだ。

English

This is the front yard of Shinjuku Center Building. Look at the growth of the tree. The width of the tree taken photo in color in 2011 got much bigger than that of in monochrome shot in 1986. It seems that the fundamental shape of the tree would not change over 25 years.

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jojo 52 speedy & straight
jojo rated this translation result as ★★★★ 08 May 2014 at 14:33

original
This is the front yard of Shinjuku Center Building. Look at the growth of the tree. The width of the tree taken photo in color in 2011 got much bigger than that of in monochrome shot in 1986. It seems that the fundamental shape of the tree would not change over 25 years.

corrected
This is a front yard of Shinjuku Center Building. Look at how the tree grows. It is much bigger in the colored photo taken in 2011 than the one in the monochrome photo taken in 1986. It seems the tree's fundamental shape has not changed over 25 years.

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bon_usa bon_usa 08 May 2014 at 16:06

より分かりやすく添削していただいて、ありがとうございます!

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