Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

添付のプライスリストは、画像が粗く、あまりよく文字が読み取れませんでした。
申し訳ありませんが、このメールアドレスに、
もう一度プライスリストを送って頂けないでしょうか？
お手数をおかけしますが、
よろしくお願いします。

English

I was not able to read the price list you sent me very well, because the image was not of very good quality.
Would you mind sending me the price list again at this e-mail address?
Thank you in advance, and sorry to put you to the trouble.

Reviews ( 1 )

chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★ 24 Mar 2014 at 20:45

original
I was not able to read the price list you sent me very well, because the image was not of very good quality.
Would you mind sending me the price list again at this e-mail address?
Thank you in advance, and sorry to put you to the trouble.

corrected
I was not able to read the price list you sent me very well, because the image was not of very good quality.
Would you mind sending me the price list again at this e-mail address?
Thank you in advance, and sorry for troubling you.

[mshimokawa-129]

for troubling youは直接的で、故意性を感じてしまうので、to put someone to the troubleのほうが適切と思います。またこの場合は動名詞ではなく不定詞を使うほうが、時間の流れ的にふさわしいでしょう。

[mshimokawa-129]

ともあれ、レビューして下さりありがとうございました、chee_madam様。