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Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 09 Dec 2013 at 01:58
私の注文についてxxx@yyy宛にメールで確認しましたが一切連絡がなく、
また、注文したWEBページにもアクセスできなくなっています。
そのため、注文の支払いをキャンセルします。
I sent an email to xxx@yy to confirm about my order, but there is no reply from you.
I also tried to access to your website, but I couldn't.
So, I want to cansel it.
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I sent an email to xxx@yy to confirm about my order, but there is no reply from you.
I also tried to access to your website, but I couldn't.
So, I want to cansel it.
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I sent an email to xxx@yy to confirm about my order, but there has been no reply.
Also, I can no longer access the website which I ordered it through.
So, I will cancel payment for the order.
You removed too much information. I took out "you" to make it more ambiguous