Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

こんにちは

９月２０日に注文をした〇〇です。
Order NO.3160152

私のオーダーは受理されていますか？
私のクレジットカードの承認は大丈夫でしたか？
このアイテムはいつ発送になりますか？

連絡お待ちしております。

English

Hello,

I'm OO who placed order on 20th September.
Order number is 3160152.

Have you accepted my order?
Was my credit card approved?
What date will you send the item?

I look forward for your reply.

Reviews ( 1 )

jasmine_66 rated this translation result as ★★ 17 Oct 2013 at 11:04

original
Hello,

I'm OO who placed order on 20th September.
Order number is 3160152.

Have you accepted my order?
Was my credit card approved?
What date will you send the item?

I look forward for your reply.

corrected
Hello,

I'm OO who placed an order on 20th September.
Order number is 3160152.

Have you received my order?
Was my credit card approved?
When will the item be delivered?

I will be looking forward to your reply.