Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

こんにちは

９月２０日に注文をした〇〇です。
Order NO.3160152

私のオーダーは受理されていますか？
私のクレジットカードの承認は大丈夫でしたか？
このアイテムはいつ発送になりますか？

連絡お待ちしております。

English

Hello,

I am ○○ who placed the order on Sep. 20.
Order No. was 3160152

Have you received my order?
Was the verification of my credit card successful?
When will you ship the item?

I will be waiting for your reply.

Reviews ( 1 )

jasmine_66 rated this translation result as ★★★ 17 Oct 2013 at 11:08

original
Hello,

I am ○○ who placed the order on Sep. 20.
Order No. was 3160152

Have you received my order?
Was the verification of my credit card successful?
When will you ship the item?

I will be waiting for your reply.

corrected
Hello,

I am ○○ who placed the order on Sep. 20.
Order No. is 3160152

Have you received my order?
Has my credit card been approved?
When will you ship the item?

I will be waiting for your reply.