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Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 26 Jul 2013 at 15:53

naoko_horigome330
naoko_horigome330 52 英語公用語の国に3年の在住経験あり。 産業翻訳アシスタント1年ほどやって...
Japanese

「ポイント」・てんかん(けいれん)重積状態は, 乳幼児と高齢者に多い. ・原因は多様であり, 予後は, 基本的に原疾患に左右され, 治療に際しては複雑な要因が関与するので絶対的な方法はない. ・けいれん発作が長く続くほど止まりにくくなり, その後の脳の発達に影響する. ・わが国で2009年12月より静注用フェノバルビタール(ノーベルバール(R)), 2011年12月にフォスフェニトイン(ホストイン(R))が適応承認となったことは福音である.

English

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・ Status epilepticus is often seen in the infants and eldery.
・ Its cause is various, and the prognosis normally depends on the primary disease. Since complicated factors concern, there is no definite method of treatment for it.
・ Longer convulsive seizure continues, more difficult it will be to stop status epilepticus, and will affect the subsequent growth of the brain.
・ It is a good news that the approval of the indication of intravenous phenobarbital (Nobelbar(R)) since Dec 2009 and fosphenytoin (Fostoin(R)) in December 2011.

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fuyunoriviera 63 Hello :) I'm a native English spea...
fuyunoriviera rated this translation result as ★★★★ 26 Jul 2013 at 21:33

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<Point>
・ Status epilepticus is often seen in the infants and eldery.
Its cause is various, and the prognosis normally depends on the primary disease. Since complicated factors concern, there is no definite method of treatment for it.
Longer convulsive seizure continues, more difficult it will be to stop status epilepticus, and will affect the subsequent growth of the brain.
It is a good news that the approval of the indication of intravenous phenobarbital (Nobelbar(R)) since Dec 2009 and fosphenytoin (Fostoin(R)) in December 2011.

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<Point>
・ Status epilepticus is often seen in infants and the eldery.
It has various causes, and the prognosis normally depends on the primary disease. Since complicated factors are concerned, there is no definite method of treatment for it.
Status epilepticus is harder to stop the longer the convulsive seizures continue and it affects the subsequent growth of the brain.
The approval of the indication of intravenous phenobarbital (Nobelbar(R)) from Dec 2009 and fosphenytoin (Fostoin(R)) in December 2011 is good news.

naoko_horigome330 naoko_horigome330 28 Jul 2013 at 08:10

丁寧なレビューをありがとうございます!より伝わりやすい訳し方がわかり、参考になります。

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